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Collision Course 4.55
“Hmmm, yeah, I think so, will Jo and Bette be back?” asked Carmen going over to the fridge and pulling out an orange. Tossing it up, caught it, and then proceeding to peel it, throwing the peels into the sink, hoping that Ro had fixed the trash compactor.
“I think so, if Jo Wheaton doesn’t kill me,” grumbled Alice under her breath.
“Why would Agent Wheaton want to kill you?” asked a deep fast paced voice from the still open doorway. “I’m sorry, the door was open and I was going to knock, but heard you ladies speaking.”
“Dude, we don’t like white men in Echo Park…,” said Carmen with a grin, recognizing the man from The Planet. Raising her orange in a hello, bright smile putting Jack Bauer in alert, Jack was always on alert, he didn’t know what down time was.
“CTU Agent Jack Bauer, may I come in?” asked the blonde haired man, not wanting to over step his welcome. Dressed in a pair of faded jeans and a crisp white shirt, Jack looked weathered and sexy.
“Uh huh,” said both Alice and Carmen at the same time.
The man stepped through the door, a quick guarded smile crossing his face, “I was looking for Rosita Navarro?”
“She’s… out…,” said Alice, tossing a look at Carmen, who shrugged, not knowing what the man might want with Rosita. Was Ro in some sort of trouble, she’d recounted her meeting with Jack Bauer, including the fact that she had been carrying a gun at the time.
“If I leave my number, will you please have her get back to me, I think I might have something she might be interested in,” said Jack in his rat-a-tat-tat speech.
“She’s gay,” said Alice and Carmen in unison thinking he was looking for someone to take out to dinner or something as straight as that.
“I wasn’t looking for a date. Do you two do that often? Talk in concurrence?” asked Jack, his gaze moving from one to the other.
“No,” they stated. “Stop it!” said Alice to Carmen who giggled. “She should be back…”
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I’m having to be selective about what stories I read, NO TIME. My son has NO #3 on one arm and #8 on the other.Can show at work. He is a Nasa car FREAK. Okay Bette and Jo No living together. Sam and hane Together. Tina Quin together Maybe that would be hot. Ro will do what she thinks best You threw LOT OF SHIT AT US. Just will close, it 86 here today. Dont hurt yourself with the snowblower and dont work to hard thanks bvh
I didn’t expect Bette and Jo’s “honeymoon” to end so abruptly. And Sam’s just full of surprises, huh? Ro working on an elite team of crimefighters sounds like a good idea, too. As for Quin and Tina…that’s kind of a nice pairing. But how will Quin take to dating her sister’s ex?
Thanks for posting. Love your stories as always. Ten years ago I would have taken you up on the 3some but have to pass now. Thanks.
One situation, two couples: Younger couple, Sam and Shane, broach the subject of living together. It’s done and dusted, with a “yes” and some hot, happy sex in like, no time flat. Older, “wiser” (?!?) couple, Jo and Bette, broach the subject of living together. They throw a protracted wobbler, in tandem, with a pretty much unequivocal “no” being the answer, and have to be told to behave by the stewardess. Uh-huh. Yeah. They might be players, but Shane and Sam could maybe teach B & J a lesson in maturity. Heh! Anyway, Ro should take the job, she’ll kick ass and take names; Carmen and Lara are still hot… Carmen maybe needs to test “Heaven” out; and Quin and Tina are starting to look good… *very* good. Let’s see what Amy does to throw a monkey wrench into everything. Great chapter, Janet, as ever. Thanks
Well, with Jo and Bette, two alphas there is bound to be some horn battering. It will be interesting to see if they can work through it…Quin and Tina = HOT HOT HOT!!! Thanks for this morning treat!!
Stick to your guns Jo! Don’t move in w/ Bette! Afterall Jo has the bigger place & Bette’s reasons for not moving (Angelica) are weak. Loved their fight, also love Ro’ & Alice’s. Ro should def. take the job. Really like Tina w/ Quin but not sure Quin should be tied down just yet.