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Collision Course 4.65
“Just Shane,” whispered Rosita under her breath.
“What?” asked Carmen turning around and giving Rosita a hard look.
“Carmen, you were wrecked when I got here, you were head over heels in love with her, they only reason you didn’t work out the last time was that Shane was already head over heels in love with Sam,” said Rosita in a soft voice, her Barrio accent gone. “If there’d been no Sam in the picture, you’d still be with her.”
Carmen didn’t say anything, her face getting red, then after a long while, “That’s bullshit.”
“Maybe,” said Rosita. After working for a short time with Emma, learning how the mind works, there were a great many things in life that were becoming clearer, and some things much more murky.
“Well, we’re way to serious now, time for some alcohol!” called out Alice, walking over to her fridge and looking for something to drink.
Ro just stood there, her mysterious dark eyes watching Carmen slapping CD after CD into her computer, compiling her play list. Finally, Carmen’s similar eyes met Rosita’s, and Ro nodded, understanding completely.
*****
Lara was sitting in Twilight with Doyle, the sexy interior designer who didn’t want to be called that, she was an engineering visionary; at least, that was what Jo Wheaton had called her.
“Are you sure about the golds and the crimson?” asked Lara reaching out and touching the samples; the cloth was exquisite, as was Doyle’s taste.
Doyle smiled easily, laugh lines appearing on her cheeks, her green eyes were always filled with something playful, “Gold and Crimson for the eatery, The Planet section, and the club, not yet named section, green and pinks, accented blue if I need it. Neon, and art work in the club, there are several black and white artists that I think would be perfect. Opening night we’ll have Kat Von D doing tattoos in a private booth, she owes me a favor. The Planet, I see it much like it was, but more open, more ceilings, do you want an office above? Like Jo does here? You’ve been to the office and living quarters upstairs, yes?” asked Doyle, her voice had a song like quality to it.
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Very well put Seahurst and I second that! Noooooo, I know your are only teasing with all that fore shadowing. Ro to Carmen, if Sam weren’t around. Jo would only let Bette marry someone else over her dead body. Big sigh. Tina and Quin nice – Julie missed out. I think, I want to date Quin. LOL. PS don’t think I didn’t notice the statement about changing the future, that ought to be a very large dilemma for Jo.
love this QUIN AND TINA ARE SO CUTE TAKR CARE BVH
Not cool…so not cool. You better post soon or I’ll, I’ll…ah hell I’ll just wait w/ everyone else but I’ll be very, very sad.Great Chapter Though!
What the…? That was… What?? I’ve been knocked for six, and I don’t know what just happened… Kindred, vampires, Lara-Doyle, Carmen still loves Shane, Tina maybe loves Quin, Bette marrying someone… – WHAT??? I’m totally lost, and you ended it so cruelly… I need more please. As of like, now. Cheers Janet, thanks for the post.
The three S’s…so sweet. Tina and Quin are really hitting it off. I’m gonna echo Jo on this one… “WHAT?” Thanks for the update.
What! Love Tina and Quin together……more please. Thanks
WHAT!!!!! Janet, there are drama queens…those who write one drama scene after another as a substitute for three dimensional characters and depth of story, and then there is you…the queen of drama. This story you are telling is complex and full of nuances. Your characters have layers upon layers. You make the drama just one element in a complete and very well rounded story. You don’t just make the story about the drama. THAT is why I love reading your writing…and why I continually thank you for sharing your talent with us. Now…just who the hell is Bette marrying? Or, did I read that wrong?!!!
daaaaaammmmmnnnnn yo!!!! man… that is one HELL of a cliffhanger JM!!! ur soo freaking good at it too… hmm, alright im sensing somethin is gonna happen to Sam and Carmen is still feelin for Shane… is it finally gonna be a sharmen?? pleaseeeee keep it up mate!!! PPS!! PS- QUIN AND TINA = TOO DAMN CUTE!!
Im having an uncontrolable fit :P