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    Collision Course 4.65

     

                “No, I’ve never been upstairs, I’m not well acquainted with Jo, I mean, we are friends, but I don’t know her that well to have been invited to her room,” stammered Lara.  She was very much thrown off her game with Doyle, who seemed very at ease anywhere they were, in a paint store, or a place like Lowe’s or Home Depot.

     

                “Then I think you should see what Jo has up there, fully her idea, in fact, this was my first designing job.  One of my best, if I do say so myself, come on,” said Doyle reaching over and taking Lara’s hand, Doyle’s hand soft, but strong.

     

                Lara said nothing, being led over to the winding stairs, tossing one look back towards the quiet club, her hair falling into her eyes.  “Maybe we shouldn’t…”

     

                “Jo won’t mind,” assured Doyle.  “Trust me.”

     

                “Ok,” whispered Lara.  Looking around, stomping up the stairs behind Doyle, who was moving much more quickly than Lara had thought possible with heels that high.

     

                The second set of stairs had a palm scanner, and Lara was sure that their run up the stairs was for nothing, but Doyle put her palm to the scanner and the door opened, “Jo and I know each other very well,” instructed Doyle. 

     

                They stepped into the office and Lara gasped, teetering on the precipice of the office space, “OH MY GOD!”

     

                Doyle laughed melodically, turning, have released Lara’s hand, “Breathtaking?”

     

                “Scary as all hell,” said Lara looking down at the glass floor, taking a tentative step forward, swallowing hard.  Stepping up onto her toes, jumping up and down, testing the floor.

     

                “Reinforced, you won’t be falling through,” said Doyle moving to the wall, where a full walled mirror stood, and Doyle put her hand to the far right.  The wall slid to the left, revealing a bedroom, and once Lara stepped in, seeing a small kitchen to the right. 

     

                “This place is unreal,” sighed Lara.  “You can do this, or something like it, at The Planet?  It won’t cost me an arm and a leg and a few toes off the other foot?”

    Comments

    1. Very well put Seahurst and I second that! Noooooo, I know your are only teasing with all that fore shadowing. Ro to Carmen, if Sam weren’t around. Jo would only let Bette marry someone else over her dead body. Big sigh. Tina and Quin nice – Julie missed out. I think, I want to date Quin. LOL. PS don’t think I didn’t notice the statement about changing the future, that ought to be a very large dilemma for Jo.

    2. Not cool…so not cool. You better post soon or I’ll, I’ll…ah hell I’ll just wait w/ everyone else but I’ll be very, very sad.Great Chapter Though!

    3. What the…? That was… What?? I’ve been knocked for six, and I don’t know what just happened… Kindred, vampires, Lara-Doyle, Carmen still loves Shane, Tina maybe loves Quin, Bette marrying someone… – WHAT??? I’m totally lost, and you ended it so cruelly… I need more please. As of like, now. Cheers Janet, thanks for the post.

    4. The three S’s…so sweet. Tina and Quin are really hitting it off. I’m gonna echo Jo on this one… “WHAT?” Thanks for the update.

    5. WHAT!!!!! Janet, there are drama queens…those who write one drama scene after another as a substitute for three dimensional characters and depth of story, and then there is you…the queen of drama. This story you are telling is complex and full of nuances. Your characters have layers upon layers. You make the drama just one element in a complete and very well rounded story. You don’t just make the story about the drama. THAT is why I love reading your writing…and why I continually thank you for sharing your talent with us. Now…just who the hell is Bette marrying? Or, did I read that wrong?!!!

    6. daaaaaammmmmnnnnn yo!!!! man… that is one HELL of a cliffhanger JM!!! ur soo freaking good at it too… hmm, alright im sensing somethin is gonna happen to Sam and Carmen is still feelin for Shane… is it finally gonna be a sharmen?? pleaseeeee keep it up mate!!! PPS!! PS- QUIN AND TINA = TOO DAMN CUTE!!

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