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Collision Course 4.66
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“Wow,” whispered Alice as they stood inside what was to be the club of The Planet. Things were progressing nicely, there were splashes of paint on some of the half finished walls, giving Alice a good idea of what Lara had in mind.
“I know,” said Lara in an equally quiet voice. “I couldn’t have imagined that it would get done so fast.”
“Kit would be so freaking proud,” said Alice walking over to where the kitchen would be, slightly different place than it had been before. The eatery was now U shaped, but the angle was so that someone at the north end could see all the way to the south end. The bar was no longer against the kitchen wall; it was across from the kitchen. Lara would have to separate waitstaff, one for the kitchen, the other for the coffee bar area. Everything was high tech, orders would be placed on an in-house PDA system.
“I hope so,” smiled Lara. “I have a favor to ask.”
“So ask it,” grinned Alice walking over towards where the club entrance was going to be. Looking in, whistling again, impressed, it was huge, and there looked to be rooms upstairs, but Alice didn’t ask about that just yet.
“Can the radio show do a sweet ass promotion for me? This place will have tapped out my accounts, all of them, even the one that had the insurance money in it, all gone,” sighed Lara knowing that she was going to be dead ass broke when it was all said and done.
“Consider it done,” smiled Alice swinging an arm over Lara’s shoulder, putting her head on it.
“Thanks,” said Lara relieved her bank account was drained and Lara wanted this to be a success, not just for her, but for everyone she loved.
“So, what is the name of the club?”
“I can’t tell you, at least not yet, it’s a secret, it’s Carmen’s secret in fact, she and Doyle are keeping it hush hush,” grinned Lara.
“You are so in love,” laughed Alice as two work men walked by, one of them winked at Alice and she winked back.
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Damn, that was intense. Although it seem inevitable that Sam would die with her luck or lack of. Too bad Jo could save her.
Nah i loved it. I just had some really bad coffee plus, i get cranky when nothing’s good on tv.
i just caught up with all the posts while ive been away and there was alot…. loads of drama… and it comes to this – i felt like crying, nearly did too (watching Pitch Black so i couldnt..lol) Poor Shane, she is going to be so distraught… why did you have to kill her why? Poor shane….. and who is bette going to marry…. oooo – please post more asap! LOVE THIS STORY!
NO! Sam can’t die! Ack!! You are a wicked lady Rogue….please update soon.
No it wasn’t bad, there’s nothing even remotely bad about this story. I was just a little lost the last chapter… Now, I’m sad. Poor Shane. Post soon, Janet.
O M Gosh….I need to digest. °_°….Great writing but I’m blown away right now. Poor Shane…tell me it was a dream. please. WOW pps.
Holy… mother.. of… god! JM, holy shit!!!! i literally screamed; i actually did… my mum came busting through my door asking what was wrong. So… what’s gonna happen to Shane?? omg; holy shit… i dunno what to say.. i love ur story… whoa; u always blew me away with ur cliff man.. Jo; is gonna be hard on her self; dont let her please… i love jo; she’s so cool.. Wow!! please JM PPS!!
Blown away by this chapter one kick ass piece of writing…Thank you.
J, I know you can figure out a way for Sam to still be alive. Please…Come on, why does anyone have to die? You made us love these characters that you created, so don’t take them away from us. PLEEEEEZE……save Sam!!!!
DAMN JM! Is Sam’s family tree cursed or what? More hardship has come this womans way than any character in a Lifetime T.V. movie. I was reading this update w/ the feeling of gloom in the pit of my stomach (& you didn’t disappoint.) Have to mention, you continue to physically torture Jo – ‘her nose exploded’ – too gross. LOL I’ll stick to my repetitive adjectives instead of digging for new ones that describe your fic – F*ckin’ fantastic.By the by just read JADES again this past week I was just as glued as I was the first time.
Damn you’re good!!! Better than good!! I am so caught up in this story! Thank you J.
Excellent installment…but I need to upgrade you from mean to evil for killing Sam, wickedly evil JM!
nooooo Sam can’t die …sam ROCKS!!!..it has to be a dream….pleaaaaseeee?????