Fan Fiction
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Come Away with Me
“Here you go”
“Ooo Thank you.”
” Now for the other surprise, this one is kind of like a few rolled into one and I think it is the best one out of them all because I came up with and planned this all by myself.”
“Then I am sure it will be the best but just so you know this was the best surprise I have ever had so.”
” Well then if you put them all together at the end of the night and class it as one big surprise then hopefully you will show me how much you liked them.”
“Don’t you worry I will.”
“Well I had to do this in stages for it to work so you next ultimate surprise designed and manufactured by Dana Fairbanks her self is”
“Come on Dane if I get much more excited will have to pee which means I will have to wait longer for you to tell me which is not good.”
“Ok I will tell you I have planned for me and you to go to Hawaii for two weeks and we leave tomorrow night.”
Alice stunned into silence, which thought, was physically impossible she can’t believe what Dana just told her and how fast she said it as well.
Dana is a little worried because Alice hasn’t said a thing yet she thought she would like this.
Alice noticed the worried look on Dana’s face.
“I can’t believe you would do all this for me I don’t deserve you.”
“Are you kidding me you deserve better so much better but for some reason you want to stay here and I am not going to argue with that I am just going to try and be everything you deserve and the athlete in me will try and get you that little bit more.”
“I am totally speech less right now Fairbanks who thought is was possible.”
“So is that a good thing do you like it because I mean if you don’t we can do something else.”
“What no I love it but I can’t I mean I want to more than anything but I have work and articles and stupid stuff.”
“Aaaa well that is the other part of this perfect surprise I called your boss and they agreed that you have two weeks off starting tomorrow all you have to do is research on your next article.”
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(47 votes, average: 3.30 out of 5)
phucking beautiful story!!!! Keep up the great work !!!
Hey I like this. Waiting your next post. Thanks.
nice job! the reading is a little tough because it all runs together when you post it– but it’s worth the trouble! keep it up!
That was great, Keep it up. thanks
Thank you after a long day this was a wonderfully long story to brighten it. Please do this again
that was great i love it and keep up the good work