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Come Back To Me chapter 2.
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"Fuck you Bette!! This was different. This was sex. Sex was never our problem. Not really. Even when we had our lulls we were still solid. It wasn’t the sex that tore us up." She paused. Then, "unless of course we’re talking about extra-marital sex."
Bette was winged. She winced, and looked at her feet. "I was wondering when that was coming", she said through soft silent tears.
"Bette, I’m sorry. This is not going the way I wanted. Not at all. It’s just…you’ve broken us and I can’t trust you anymore. Just let me leave. Please." She began to cry softly as she left the bedroom.
Tina quickly walked through the house grabbing her purse and coat from the sofa on her way out the door.
Bette was searching furiously for her shirt in the bedroom. Tearing the covers off the bed. She finally found it and quickly put it on, not bothering with the buttons. She ran after Tina. By the time she caught up with her Tina was almost half-way down the block about 10 feet from her car. Why the fuck did she park all the way down here?
"Tina!", Bette cried as she grabbed her arm and spun her around. Tina had just enough presence of mind to hold her coat and purse in front of her as camouflage. She knew the full moon hid nothing once you were fully under it and not hidden away in a bedroom. Tina’s eyes turned angry as she glanced at Bette’s hand gripping her arm, and then angrier as she looked into Bette’s eyes. "Get your hands off me!"
"Tina, I’m sorry. Look, I’ll let you go if you can look me in the eyes and tell me this is goodbye. If you think we are beyond therapy, beyond forgiveness, beyond hope… I wanna see it in your eyes."
Tina broke her glare and shot a glance to the ground. She gathered up all the strength she could muster and looked Bette square in the eyes. "I’m sorry. It’s over", Tina said as she quickly snapped herself free from Bette’s clutches and headed to her car.
Tina had already started her car but Bette’s arm was still frozen in mid-air where she had been holding Tina’s arm. She stood there in shock, amazement. Unable to move, unable to even cry. Which was fine. There was no need to cry any more tears tonight. Tina Kennard was many things. Accomplished liar, however, was not one of them. Tina thought she was sly, but Bette noticed her eyes shift to Bette’s ear and then to Bette’s chin as she claimed they were "over". A slight smile formed at the corner of Bette’s lips. Then, realizing she was practically naked she walked quickly back to her house.
Tina was driving frantically. Had to get away fast. She was so angry at Bette. For not following the rules. For challenging her. But most of all for knowing her so well. She was fairly sure Bette knew she was full of shit when she had said they were over. She pulled over to the side of the road and slammed her hands against the steering wheel until she could not feel them anymore. Exhausted, she leaned her head forward and gave herself over to a flood of tears as her whole body shook uncontrollably.
As Tina fell asleep on the side of the road in her car Bette softly crawled back into her own bed. She had so many thoughts running through her mind but as she drifted off to sleep, clutching the pillow next to her that still carried Tina’s scent, she had hope. For the first time in weeks she had a tiny glimmer of hope. She knew it was probably be going to be blood and guts and painful before they found their way back to each other, but she was holding onto that hope as tightly as she was holding onto Tina’s pillow. Her final thoughts before sleep claimed her were given voice. "Come back to me T."
THE END.
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That was… a lot of things. Heartbreaking, hot, hopeful… but above all, it was very well-written. I hope you’ll post again sometime. Thanks
Dang, no way that can be goodbye. I’m not for anyone cheating, but the cirmcumstances were unique, and lets face it those two love each other in a way that most will never know.
BreakupSex is awful thing and its haeartbreaking,hot and soo many emotions going in all different directions at once.please let them each other again. they belonged together
Such a flood of emotions… so sad, yet so perfectly written.
THE END? I SOOO HOPE YOU DONT MEAN THE……END……….I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS…..IT WAS AMAZING…..AWESOMELY WRITTEN, AND SOOO SAD…..BUT ONE OF THE BEST BY FAR……PLEASE CONTINUE….DONT STOP NOW…..
You did warn us from the beginning, so I guess I can’t complain :). I cannot believe this is your first story. Where have you been hiding? Please come back soon. As I said before, please feel free to alter any of the depressing B&T stuff we’ve had to endure for 3 seasons. Your writing is amazing. Thank you for sharing your story.
wow that so didnt go the way i expected but it was rly well written thank you for sharing pp again it was nice to read rly good writing
Thanks everybody for the comments. Was very nervous with my first story. I’ve been throwing around other ideas. Especially one about some “allegedly” reknowned artist in upstate new york being killed by a piece of her own artwok. apparently a huge metallic 7 fell on her head from 30 feet high. she died instantly. In fact, I just wrote it. What do you think? :-)
really good, but sad ending…it was really short story, but i hope to see that you come back with a new story…
let them find their way back RH!
That was really good, the only bad thing about it was it was the end.
I like how you ended this. Plus, didn’t Bette wake up the next day in pajamas? I think I once watched that episode and wondered how the hell she managed to change clothes if she ended up passing out cold due to being really drunk.
There’s more psychological depth in this exquisitely written story than in a season’s worth of TLW. Thanks for posting, and I hope we hear from you again (the sooner the better). The Jodi-killed-by-own-artwork storyline would be a definite crowd pleaser.
Even though this story is over and Tina said that they were through I am like Bette, they have hope. Even with all that has taken place in the show they still love one another and there is always hope until one is gone (like death and they are both very much alive). Thank you for the story and please come to us with another of your thoughts.
That was sad and emotional and hope they will get back together, they belonged together. Thanks for sharing this story with us and hope to see you again! Sorry to hear about the artist, my prayed for her family and friend!
Hearbreaking chapter, but very very good like Bette i hope Tina will come home soon. Congrats for this story i hope that you continue posting
that was bloody hard to read…so sad…