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Come Back To Me chapter 2.
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Previously…
"Shh, shh. It’s ok." Tina tried to calm her, stroking first her hair and then the arm that rested on her side. Bette’s mind was struggling through the booze fog. Something’s different. She felt the side of the bed behind her sinking slightly. Somebody was in bed with her. She didn’t even remember how she got to bed, and now there was some stranger next to her? Nice move, Bette she silently reprimanded herself before realizing that she recognized the scent behind her. She slowly rolled over and found herself staring directly into Tina’s eyes. The moonlight coming through the windows gave away Tina’s golden tresses and beautiful eyes but not much else.
Bette couldn’t believe her eyes. I must still be drunk. "Is this real?" she asked weakly.
Chapter 2.
"Yes, Bette." Tina said softly. "And those are the last words you get to say to me tonight."
"What do you-"
"I mean," Tina cut her off, "that if you say one more word to me I will have to get out of this bed and leave. Do you understand?"
Bette nodded, her eyes rimming with tears.
" Rule #2: You cannot touch me anywhere that I don’t give you explicit permission. Do you understand that?"
Again Bette nodded, but stared at Tina, questioning.
"I’m here because, as much as it kills me, I can’t deny that I need you. I miss you."
Bette’s eyes began to sparkle and a slight smile formed at her lips.
"That doesn’t mean what you think, Bette. I’m here to say… goodbye. I can’t stand the fact that our last time together was so…" She struggled for the right word to describe the night their life came unglued. Angry? Violent? Heartbreaking? They all worked, but still did not do it justice. Tina winced. Thinking of that night made her heart sink. Bette responded in kind understanding the horror that night had been filled with.
"Anyway…I think (and hope) that me coming here tonight, us being together one last time, will allow me to get on with my life. I’m dealing with a lot of things right now. You have no idea how hard this is for me. I need to get ‘us’ resolved so that I can move on and deal with…these things. Do you understand that?" she asked again as she continued the checklist of all the conditions that Bette had to agree to.
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That was… a lot of things. Heartbreaking, hot, hopeful… but above all, it was very well-written. I hope you’ll post again sometime. Thanks
Dang, no way that can be goodbye. I’m not for anyone cheating, but the cirmcumstances were unique, and lets face it those two love each other in a way that most will never know.
BreakupSex is awful thing and its haeartbreaking,hot and soo many emotions going in all different directions at once.please let them each other again. they belonged together
Such a flood of emotions… so sad, yet so perfectly written.
THE END? I SOOO HOPE YOU DONT MEAN THE……END……….I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS…..IT WAS AMAZING…..AWESOMELY WRITTEN, AND SOOO SAD…..BUT ONE OF THE BEST BY FAR……PLEASE CONTINUE….DONT STOP NOW…..
You did warn us from the beginning, so I guess I can’t complain :). I cannot believe this is your first story. Where have you been hiding? Please come back soon. As I said before, please feel free to alter any of the depressing B&T stuff we’ve had to endure for 3 seasons. Your writing is amazing. Thank you for sharing your story.
wow that so didnt go the way i expected but it was rly well written thank you for sharing pp again it was nice to read rly good writing
Thanks everybody for the comments. Was very nervous with my first story. I’ve been throwing around other ideas. Especially one about some “allegedly” reknowned artist in upstate new york being killed by a piece of her own artwok. apparently a huge metallic 7 fell on her head from 30 feet high. she died instantly. In fact, I just wrote it. What do you think? :-)
really good, but sad ending…it was really short story, but i hope to see that you come back with a new story…
let them find their way back RH!
That was really good, the only bad thing about it was it was the end.
I like how you ended this. Plus, didn’t Bette wake up the next day in pajamas? I think I once watched that episode and wondered how the hell she managed to change clothes if she ended up passing out cold due to being really drunk.
There’s more psychological depth in this exquisitely written story than in a season’s worth of TLW. Thanks for posting, and I hope we hear from you again (the sooner the better). The Jodi-killed-by-own-artwork storyline would be a definite crowd pleaser.
Even though this story is over and Tina said that they were through I am like Bette, they have hope. Even with all that has taken place in the show they still love one another and there is always hope until one is gone (like death and they are both very much alive). Thank you for the story and please come to us with another of your thoughts.
That was sad and emotional and hope they will get back together, they belonged together. Thanks for sharing this story with us and hope to see you again! Sorry to hear about the artist, my prayed for her family and friend!
Hearbreaking chapter, but very very good like Bette i hope Tina will come home soon. Congrats for this story i hope that you continue posting
that was bloody hard to read…so sad…