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    Coming Back – Chapter 10

    Story written on August 28, 2005 by CraZyClo.
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    Shane’s confession…


    Shane : (wipe a tear) (sniff) Hello?

    Carmen : Hi Baby! (happily)

    Shane : Hi.

    Carmen : I’m sorry, I haven’t be able to call you before, I’m in my break.

    Shane : It’s okay.

    Carmen : What’s wrong baby ? Your voice is sounding so sad.

    Shane : Well.. we got the results of Jenny’s test.

    Carmen : And ? (worried)

    Shane : Hum.. It’s a.. (sniff) It’s a .. (wipe a tear) Brain tumour. (cries)

    Carmen : No!! No Jenny No!!


    (silence)


    Shane : Listen.. I.. I’ll call you tomorrow.. Mmmmkay?

    Carmen : (surprised) Hum.. okay.

    Shane : I’m sorry.

    Carmen : Love you baby.

    Shane : Me too Bye.


    Before Carmen can says “Bye”, Shane’s cell phone was already close. Shane closes her eyes, tears comes out her eyes. Marina feels that there’s something wrong with her, but she can’t find what. Actually Alice and Dana too, but they don’t take it very seriously knowing how much Jenny was important for Shane. In a certain way, they are a little bit surprised how Shane reacts, not that she over reacts or whatever, the way she reacts in comparison with Marina’s reaction, who’s quite more peaceful, even if she cries too.


    In the evening they talk a little bit, but nothing important or serious, in a way, they’re all overwhelm by the situation.



     

    AROUND 10:45 PM



    Dana and Alice decide to leave. They are working tomorrow. Dana gets up and go toward Marina.


    Dana : I have to go, I’m training tomorrow morning.

    Marina : Okay, thanks for coming.


    Dana smiles. Alice gets up too.


    Alice : Me too, I’ll go get some sleep.

    Marina : Thanks of coming, Alice.

    Alice : I’ll probably pass this week.

    Marina : Perfect.


    (silence)


    Marina : Take care guys.

    Shane : Bye guys.


    Dana and Alice leave the room. Shane looks at Marina then stare into space.


    Marina : Are you working tomorrow?

    Shane : (come back to reality) Hum no.


    (silence)


    Marina : I’ll go take a shower in the little bathroom. Is that okay ?

    Shane : Yeah sure .. no problem.


    Marina walks toward the bathroom.


    Shane : Do you mind if I stay here tonight ? The house is gonna be so empty.

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    1. Mmm, interesting little senario we have here. I love Marina’s reaction “WHT DID YOU SAY”? Finally something that will maybe get a genuine rise out of our always calm and quiet Marina. I can’t wait to see how Marina handles this with Shane. EXCELLENT CHAPTER,I see back here soon….

    2. this as a tyte lil’ chapter but please don’t tell me that when Jenny wakes up (or even if she does),that her and Shane gon hook up. It would seem like insest or something. Great, great updates; please update soon.

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