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    Coming Back – Chapter 10

    Marina : No problem, I’ll be happy. But? Carmen is not sleeping home?

    Shane : No.. She’s in Santa Monica for a couple days.

    Marina : Okay.

    Shane : She got a contract in a club there.

    Marina : Cool.


    (pause)


    Marina : I’ll be back soon.

    Shane : Okay.


    Marina takes the bag of clothes that Shane brought to her and enters in the bathroom. After she hears the door lock, Shane go sit on the bed, on the side of Jenny. She looks at her, she looks so peaceful, her eyes are close, that gives her a cute baby face. Shane takes her hand and hold it like the most beautiful treasure in the world, she’s so careful. She caresses with the tip of her finger the back of Jenny’s hand, looking at every single details of the small hand. This hand looks so perfect, no marks on it, nothing but pure perfection. Shane looks at Jenny.


    Shane : Hey! I might think this is actually the best moment I can tell you all of this. Yeah I know you’re still in the coma but, I don’t think you’ll want to hear it when you’re gonna be awake. I look ridiculous talking to you now, but it’s the best I can do.. for you and.. for me. You know.. in the last hours.. I mean since your in the coma I just realise how much you’re important to me. Just to see you like this kills me. Today, I’ve passed hours thinking of you. I thought about everything.. everything you do.. everything you are .. everything you’ve pass threw in the last few days, months, years everything. I know, a couple days ago, the thing you were dreaming for just happen, Marina came back to you. I think I’ve never seen you that happy in my life


    Marina finishes taking her shower. She dries herself, put some clothes on and unlock the door. Shane doesn’t hear her.


    Shane : well, with all this, what I wanted to tell you is that I maybe feel more than friendship for you


    Marina opens the door. Shane still doesn’t hear her.


    Shane : I’m in love with you.


    (a second of silence)


    Marina : (surprised and upset) WHAT DID YOU JUST SAY ?

     


     

    To Be Continued

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    Comments

    1. Mmm, interesting little senario we have here. I love Marina’s reaction “WHT DID YOU SAY”? Finally something that will maybe get a genuine rise out of our always calm and quiet Marina. I can’t wait to see how Marina handles this with Shane. EXCELLENT CHAPTER,I see back here soon….

    2. this as a tyte lil’ chapter but please don’t tell me that when Jenny wakes up (or even if she does),that her and Shane gon hook up. It would seem like insest or something. Great, great updates; please update soon.

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