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Coming Back – Chapter 15
Hi,
Hope you had fun last night with that girl.
I’m at the Planet till the end of the afternoon.
Have a nice day.
Marina
Shane eats her breakfast slowly, she’s totally lost in deep thought.
SHANE’S THOUGHT
Shane’s walking on the sidewalk of Hollywood Boulevard, she looks at the small shops everywhere. After a couple of minutes of walking there, she notices some girl walking about 15 feet in front of her, this girl have the same physical attributes and similar facial characteristics then Jenny. Shane starts walking faster and tries to get her. She finally gets in front of that girl. She’s exactly like Jenny, every details are the same. Shane gives her the biggest hug she never gave to anyone. She looks in that girls eyes, those beautiful eyes that she’ll remember for the rest of her life. She slowly closes her eyes and kisses that girl. The girl kisses her too, the kiss is full of passion, peace and love. Shane feels like she’s in heaven, nothing in the world can ruin that moment, a moment of pure passion and love. Every parts of her body, feel the pain that love can give us when we are confronted to those hard and powerful emotions. The world around them disappears, they’re flying in Heaven, everything starts to spin so fast.
Then Shane’s cell phone starts ringing in her bedroom. Shane hardly comes back to reality, the reality where Jenny is dead. That reality that now she’s alone, all by herself. After two times that her phone is ringing, she runs to her room to answer to it.
Shane : Hello ?
Jeff : What are you doing, it’s already half an hour that I’m waiting for you.
***** ! I totally forgot about him. How could I forget ?
Shane : I know, I’ll be there in 10 minutes okay?
Jeff : You better be here in 10 minutes, otherwise you’ll
Shane : 10 minutes, I’ll be there. Bye.
He doesn’t have time to say anything else that she has already hung up the phone. She runs to her wardrobe and gets an old pair of jeans, with a old Depeche Mode T-shirt. As she goes to the door, she puts some converse shoes, the classic ones. She gets in her car and leaves for the Planet.
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okay, that´s hard, poor shane.
I love ur writing.it’s so beautifully intense and real!
Hey there! Look I keep coming back. I have to agree with CR00’s comments and poor Shane has taken one helluva BeatDown here. Flashing back to how Marina confronted Melissa about her treatment of Jenny. I can only imagine her and Carmen’s wrath against Jeff in defense of their good friend Shane. I love Marina’s thoughts of Jenny, true love never really dies…
I read it again…and hey I´m a little bit shocked. It´s really tough what happened to shane, but I love drama and I hope you´ll go on soon!!!
Poor Shane… Carmen has to help her.
Shane is so weak now. Post soon, please. I crave your fic like a drug.
wow shane and herione, what a mix up that shit eats peeps for breakfast. It’s true some people have to beat themselves down before they can get back up. looking forward to seeing where your going with this.
Fukin sik…poor Shane…if onli she had suked the bastard..Carmen&Marina&P3ople need 2 fuking help her!…(addictive writing)Post s0On..
Good job! Let’s see what’s up next for Shane and the others…
wow! poor shane, i can’t wait to see what happens next.