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Coming Back – Chapter 15
IN THE MEANTIME AT THE PLANET
Marina’s serving a customer at one of the table, he’s talking on his cell phone and looks very upset. She looks at him and puts his cup of coffee on the table. After a moment, she goes back to the kitchen. Comes back to the front leans on the counter and stares into space. She’s obviously thinking of Jenny.
MARINA’S THOUGHT
Marina stands in the Planet, Jenny walks in and sits at a table. She looks at Marina and Marina looks at her. There is absolutely no word to describe the intensity of the look that they give to each other. This sight is so much more then passion and love, it’s pure truth. They slowly walk to meet, everything around them disappears, they’re still looking in each others the eyes. When they finally meet, they close their eyes and kiss, passionately.
Carmen enters in the Planet and goes to the counter. She calls Marina in the kitchen. Marina’s back to realty at the third time that Carmen calls her. Marina walks to the counter to talk with Carmen.
Carmen : Hi, how are you ?
Marina : I’m fine thanks, and you ?
Carmen : I will survive.
Marina : Can I ask you something ?
Carmen : Yeah, of course.
Marina : Do you know who’s that guy sitting over there?
Marina points the place where the guy is sitting. He looks a little bit like Cillian Murphy with some jeans and long-sleeves jacket. Carmen turns to look at the guy and turns again towards Marina.
Carmen : Sorry, have no idea on who he can be.
Marina : I don’t know, his face is familiar but I don’t know where I can have seen him.
Carmen : Hum no idea.
Marina : It’s okay.
Carmen : I’ll be back in about 15 minutes, I’ll go in that little store where they sell natural products.
Marina : It’s okay, I’ll wait for you to take a little break so we’ll be able to talk.
Carmen : Perfect.
Carmen leaves the Planet and Marina goes back in the kitchen. Two minutes later, Shane gets in the Planet and goes at the guy’s table. She sits in front of him.
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okay, that´s hard, poor shane.
I love ur writing.it’s so beautifully intense and real!
Hey there! Look I keep coming back. I have to agree with CR00’s comments and poor Shane has taken one helluva BeatDown here. Flashing back to how Marina confronted Melissa about her treatment of Jenny. I can only imagine her and Carmen’s wrath against Jeff in defense of their good friend Shane. I love Marina’s thoughts of Jenny, true love never really dies…
I read it again…and hey I´m a little bit shocked. It´s really tough what happened to shane, but I love drama and I hope you´ll go on soon!!!
Poor Shane… Carmen has to help her.
Shane is so weak now. Post soon, please. I crave your fic like a drug.
wow shane and herione, what a mix up that shit eats peeps for breakfast. It’s true some people have to beat themselves down before they can get back up. looking forward to seeing where your going with this.
Fukin sik…poor Shane…if onli she had suked the bastard..Carmen&Marina&P3ople need 2 fuking help her!…(addictive writing)Post s0On..
Good job! Let’s see what’s up next for Shane and the others…
wow! poor shane, i can’t wait to see what happens next.