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Coming Back – Chapter 3
Marina : A month maybe.
Jenny : A month ? I havent see you before
Marina : I was. kinda hiding.
Jenny : Of me ?
Marina : I was scared of your reaction. I thought you were upset cause of me.
Jenny : I understand.
Marina : But now Im back to stay, (look in Jennys eyes and take her hands) to stay with you ?
Jenny : hum (scared)
Its maybe a little fast, she thought.
Marina : Scuse me, its maybe a little fast.
Jenny : No.. hum no its okay.
Marina : (smiling) Perfect.
Jenny : You can come to my place, its big.
Marina : Sure, “ce sera avec plaisir”(French)
Jenny : But you know that Shane and Carmen are living with me.
Marina : (smiling) Yes, I know
JENNYS HOUSE – AFTERNOON
They leave the Planet to go take Marinas stuff in the motel where she lived for a month. Then they go at Jennys house. Later that day, Marina start making diner. Shane comes in. Shes surprise to see Marina there, but very happy at the same time.
Shane : (surprised) Hi !
Marina : (smiling) Hi !
Shane hugs Marina.
Shane : How are you ?
Marina : Very good and you ?
Shane : Tired
Marina : Well its good because Ive prepared that huge lunch, so you and Carmen can eat with us.
Shane : Sounds like a plan. Ill call Carmen for diner.
Marina : Perfect.
Shane goes in her room to call Carmen for diner.
Shane : Hi baby! tired hum are you gonna be here for diner cool.. around seven yep love ya.. bye.
Shane comes back in the kitchen.
Marina : So ?!?..
Shane : Shes gonna be here around seven.
Marina : Excellent.
Shane : So wheres Jenny ?
Marina : Shes taking a shower.
Shane : Kay so.. that was fast.. ?
Marina : Well yes, but.. we both want to be together so..
Shane : Good point.. how it happened ?
Marina : (smiling) Well, that was a surprise
Jenny come out the bathroom and go in her room.
Shane : continue
Marina : Well I was at the Planet for a coffee, then she came in and we talked
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It’s so nice to have you back. As for choosing which story you should continue with, I choose # 1. I like the direction that this story seems to be heading. As for story no.2, it’s only natural that Jenny would have feelings of doubt about Marina’s love and motives towards her,in time I believe that both Marina and Jenny will have to prove that their love is true and pure for each other.CC, I admire how you tell love story of Marina and Jenny,it’s so sweet yet so real…Please keep going with story #1..I look forward to you posting again soon and have Happy Independence Day!!
As long as our girls end up together I’m always up for a kittle drama. I loved both of them my dear.
I second Lenab! But maybe a little angst and panic in Jenny would make it interesting…as long as they get back together in the end I’m all for it!!
Great story!! Can’t you continue them both like you did now? Please write Shane/Carmen ., I like the way you write the:)
Story #1 is better for me. I’m afraid that Story #2 will not allow Jenny and Marina to be together which is very important to me.
Continue Shane+Carmen:)Why can’t you do both , you write them well both!