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Coming Back – Chapter 3
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Shane : um..hum.. and ?
Marina : Thats it ?
Shane : “Thats IT ?
Marina : Well you know me I dont talk a lot of those things but essentially its like that..
Shane : I see Well Im glad you guys are back together.
Marina : Not as I am ! (she smile)
(silence)
Marina : And you and Carmen, how is it going ?
Shane : Very good..
Marina : I think its the first time I see you in love.. I mean really in love..
Shane : I am in love.
Marina : Its good for you.
Shane : Thanks (smiling)
Marina : I mean it.
Shane smile.
Marina : Why Carmen instead of all other ones ?
Shane : Its a long story, but mostly for one thing
Marina : Which one ?
Shane : She has faith in me. She knows that I can love.
Marina : (smiling) Thats very cute.
Shane : I know but its true.
Jenny arrives in the kitchen. She kisses Marina.
Jenny : Hi Shane !
Shane : Hi !
Jenny : Are you staying for diner ?
Shane : Yep, and Carmen is coming too.
Jenny : Cool.
Shane : Shell be here in 15 minutes.
Jenny : Well, well set the table.
Shane : Good.
Marina finishes preparing the diner, Jenny and Shane are setting the table. Ten minutes later, Carmen arrives, she walks towards Shane and kisses her.
Carmen : Hi everybody.
Marina and Jenny : Hi !
Shane (kissing Carmen) Hi baby!
Marina goes to Carmen.
Marina : Hi, Im Marina.
Carmen : Nice to meet you.
Marina : Pleasures mine.
Carmen : So youre Jennys new girlfriend ?
Marina smile
TBC?
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Story 2
THE PLANET – NOON
After a passionate kiss, Jenny and Marina stare at each other. Both of them didnt know what to say. Then Jenny freaks out and leaves
Marina : JENNY?
JENNYS HOUSE – AFTERNOON
Jenny doesnt understand and run She arrives home and go straight in her bedroom, she sits on her bed and keeps thinking of what just happened. Jenny walks from one side to the other of her bedroom.
Jenny : What have I done ?.. What the ***** have I done?. No Jenny you wont fall for her again.. you know what will happen.. you know it (she walks faster and faster) No Jenny.. No no no! (she stops, sits on her bed and takes her head in her hands) No Jenny! You wont fall for her.. (she starts crying) Why ??.. Why is it always to me that ***** happens??? (She stops crying and starts walking around her bedroom) Jenny calm down cmon Jenny calm down! You stay calm, you breath and you think slowly slowly. Cmon..
At the same moment, Shane walks in the bedroom.
Shane : What the *****??
TBC???
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It’s so nice to have you back. As for choosing which story you should continue with, I choose # 1. I like the direction that this story seems to be heading. As for story no.2, it’s only natural that Jenny would have feelings of doubt about Marina’s love and motives towards her,in time I believe that both Marina and Jenny will have to prove that their love is true and pure for each other.CC, I admire how you tell love story of Marina and Jenny,it’s so sweet yet so real…Please keep going with story #1..I look forward to you posting again soon and have Happy Independence Day!!
As long as our girls end up together I’m always up for a kittle drama. I loved both of them my dear.
I second Lenab! But maybe a little angst and panic in Jenny would make it interesting…as long as they get back together in the end I’m all for it!!
Great story!! Can’t you continue them both like you did now? Please write Shane/Carmen ., I like the way you write the:)
Story #1 is better for me. I’m afraid that Story #2 will not allow Jenny and Marina to be together which is very important to me.
Continue Shane+Carmen:)Why can’t you do both , you write them well both!