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Coming Back – Chapter 7
Previously
Young Jenny starts to search for an exit once again. She’s running in the darkness, sometimes she violently hurts walls, but then keeps searching. She’s crying because she’s unable to find any exit, but also this place keeps her so scared. She falls on her knees, that are now all scratched, telling herself that there is no exit and that she’s stuck there for the rest of her life. Then, far away for her, but visible, she finally sees a white door, or something that looks like that. She starts running in that direction, but as she runs, the door still looks as far as she was the first time she saw it. As far as the door is, young Jenny keeps running. After about an hour running, the door is now close to her. She comes slowly to the door, approaching her hand to the lock. She’s now at one inch of the lock, haft a inch, then the door disappear. “NNOOOOOOoooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!”
HOSPITAL – NIGHT
Marina, Shane, Carmen, Alice and Dana are still in Jenny’s room. They are all tired. Then Marina thinks that she saw Jenny moving.
Marina : She moved!!!
Shane : What are you talking about???
Marina : (happy and surprised) I’ve seen her move!!!
(silence)
Shane : Hum.. I’m sorry but she haven’t move Marina..
Marina : No.. No I’m telling you that she have
Shane : Marina.. I also want that too, that she’s moving and waking up.. but she doesn’t move.
Alice and Dana decide to leave the hospital because they are tired.
Alice : Will you excuse me, but I’m very tired, I’ll just go get some sleep.
Dana : Me too.
Marina : Yeah, sure. Thanks guys for being here, I really appreciate it.
Alice: It’s just normal. (smiles at Marina)
Marina : Thanks.
Alice and Dana leave the room. Carmen sits on Shane. After a while, Carmen falls asleep on Shane, who was already asleep.
Around 3:00 AM the nurse comes in the room to see Jenny’s condition which is still the same. Marina walks towards the nurse to get an update on her beloved.
Nurse : How is she ?
Marina : Still the same.
Nurse : I don’t see any change at this point.
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Its nice that the gang was there. How long was Marina gone. Post soon.
I absolutely love Marina and Jenny and it was so nice to read a story about them. There haven’t been many and you are doing a great job. Please post more soon.
A big hello and welcome back! That’s our girl,always strong for everyone. Love is so powerful,Marina thinking that she saw Jenny move and trying to convince Shane and Carmen that Jenny moved was quite touching. With Marina seeing Jenny lying there and unable to help her,totally broke her down and left her no choice but to pour her heart out,confessing her undyin and never ending love for jenny. I tell you it is pure hell not being able to help the person you love and that needs you the most. CC you done a marvelous job with this update..Please hurry back…
I love it! Please goon soon!!!
Marina and Jenny all the way. I think they both knew from the minute they looked at each other that “this is the one”. I love their story – please continue.