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    Coming Back – Chapter 7

    Marina : Do you have the results of the tests ?

    Nurse : I’m sorry not yet.

    Marina : You have no idea on what she has ?

    Nurse : Not a clue, sorry.

    Marina : It’s okay.

    Nurse : Do you want me to bring something to you or your friends ?

    Marina : Maybe some blankets.

    Nurse : Yes, no problem anything else ?

    Marina : No, thanks.


    The nurse smiles at Marina then leaves the room. A few minutes later the nurse comes back with some blankets. Marina takes one and put it on Carmen and Shane, who are still asleep.


    In the morning, Shane and Carmen wake up in the room, nobody’s in the room except Jenny.


    Shane : (Murmuring in Carmen ear) Morning baby.

    Carmen : (Her eyes are close, smiling) Morning.


    They kiss.


    Shane : Have you seen Marina ?

    Carmen : No, you ?

    Shane : No.

    Carmen : I don’t think she’s very far.

    Shane : Obviously.


    They get up. Shane takes the blanket and put it at the end of Jenny’s bed. As they get up and leave the room looking for Marina, Marina enters in the room with three coffees.


    Marina : I took a chance an ordered three coffees.

    Carmen : Well, good idea. (smiling at Marina)

    Shane : Mmmm, it’s gonna be so good!


    Carmen and Marina both look at Shane with an funny happy face.


    Carmen : Anything new ?

    Marina : No.

    Shane : I hope she’ll wake up soon.

    Marina : Yeah.. me too.

    Carmen : (Drinking her coffee)Humm.. by the way, thanks for the blanket.

    Marina : You’re welcome.

    Shane : Have you finally got some sleep at all last night ?

    Marina : No.

    Shane : You should try to get some sleep otherwise we’re gonna have to come see two people on an hospital bed soon.

    Marina : I know, I’ll try.

    Shane : Good.


    (Pause)


    Shane : I’ll go at the house to take a shower and to get you some clothes, is that okay ?

    Marina : Yeah, thanks.

    Shane : I’ll come back by the end of the afternoon, if there is anything just give me a call.

    Marina : Perfect. (smile at Shane)

    Carmen : Good luck.

    Marina : Thanks.

    Shane : See ya.


    Shane and Carmen leave the room with a tiny doubt on their face. Shane put her hand on Carmen hip and they leave the hospital.


    In Jenny’s room, Marina goes on the side of Jenny and takes her hand to see if she can feel something. She sits on the bed, beside Jenny and hold her hand.


    Marina : (to Jenny) Baby, what happen? It was the perfect evening, everything was so beautiful, you were so beautiful. It’s been a long time that I haven’t told you this but.. I love you, I love you since the first time I saw you, since the first time we met. Personally, the first time I saw you was kinda magic, I was so hypnotise by you, your beauty, your elegance, the way you moved, your smile, your bleu eyesthat everything else just disappear for I see just you. (She, once again, starts crying) Since that moment, this tinny second, I knew it was you, you are the one. The one that will make me happy. The one that will love me as I am and for who I was, am and will be. The one that I’ll love until I can’t breath anymore, until it hurts me to love you (pause) I now realise all those lost years that I wasn’t where I should’ve been, and that is here with you. I realise this now because I decided to play the idiot part in the story of life. Yes, an idiot,.. a plain idiot for letting you go when it was the moment that I was supposed to be there and said “yes, I love you with all my heart”. I’m so terribly sorry baby I love you, I love you so muchAnd I’ll never leave you behind, I’ll never turn my back on you ever again (she cries).

     


     

     

    To Be Continued

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    Comments

    1. I absolutely love Marina and Jenny and it was so nice to read a story about them. There haven’t been many and you are doing a great job. Please post more soon.

    2. A big hello and welcome back! That’s our girl,always strong for everyone. Love is so powerful,Marina thinking that she saw Jenny move and trying to convince Shane and Carmen that Jenny moved was quite touching. With Marina seeing Jenny lying there and unable to help her,totally broke her down and left her no choice but to pour her heart out,confessing her undyin and never ending love for jenny. I tell you it is pure hell not being able to help the person you love and that needs you the most. CC you done a marvelous job with this update..Please hurry back…

    3. Marina and Jenny all the way. I think they both knew from the minute they looked at each other that “this is the one”. I love their story – please continue.

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