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    Complications, Chapter 19

    Story written on July 31, 2006 by profoundexcuse.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=61903
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    A trip to Victoria’s Secret. Awwww yeah.

    Carmen sighed on the other end of the phone. The last thing she wanted to do was pretend she wanted to slap Shane when in reality all she wanted to do was fuck her right on the McDonald’s counter in the food court.

    “I guess. Only for a few hours, though.”

    “Great! Thank you, Carmen.”

    “Yeah, yeah.”

    “She’ll do it!”

    “Yes!” Alice pumped her fist in the air excitedly. “Time to prepare.”

    “Um… I’m not sure if I like that one.” Alice mumbled, looking Carmen, who was now standing in a sexy corset-esque piece of lingerie. “What do you think, Shane?”

    Shane was trying to look anywhere except Carmen who looked incredibly sexy, but at the same time, incredibly embarrassed.

    “Look, can we hurry this up? This is the first thing you’ve had me put on, and I’m already sick of playing underwear model for you.” Carmen sighed, leaning against the dressing room door.

    “Fine, fine. Two more.” Alice replied, tossing her another piece of clothing. If you could even call it that. It was more like a scrap.

    “A thong, Alice? Be honest, are you just trying to check me out?”

    “No! Just because you want me, doesn’t mean I want you, Carmen!” Alice answered, pushing Carmen back into the dressing room and shutting the door.

    Carmen came back out quickly, in a black bra and wife beater on the top, and just a thong down under. Shane was biting her lip and crossing her legs, trying to ignore the heat spreading through her body.

    ”Meh.” Alice sighed. “Shane, come here! You’re not helping!” Alice pulled her up out of the chair and pushed her towards Carmen. “What do you think?”

    “It looks… Nice.”

    “Okay, only nice, try this last one on.”

    Carmen groaned, taking the clothing from Alice’s hand and walking back into the dressing room. Suddenly, Shane, who had been pushed by Alice, hit her from behind and the door closed with a loud bang. She turned, trying to open the door, but Alice had jammed a chair under the knob.

    ”Are you serious, Al?” Shane yelled, banging on the door.

    “I’m dead serious, Shane. Now, work it out, because you’re staying here until the end of the day. I have a friend who works here so you’re not getting out. I’m gonna go finish shopping now. See ya later!”

    “Is she serious?” Carmen asked, bewildered.

    “Apparently.”

    “Well,” Carmen began, walking over to Shane who had sat on the bench, “Whatever shall we do for all this time?”

    Shane laughed, “I don’t know. It’s going to be so horrible!”

     

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    1. Oh that was MUCH better. ;) Does anyone think the formatting looks a little off? I see a lot of these things between paragraphs: !–[if !supportEmptyParas]–>

    2. hmm that was better, bit to be honest, the title of this chappy had me thinking owww baby Tina in some sexy lingerie and Bette being the baby and all drooling while taking it off. never the less was still good. no need to *run off crying*…LOL!!!! POST SOON!!!

    3. The language is kinda both Swedish and Finnish, can’t ever make up my mind about that…(a split soul from the day I was born I guess!! lolz!!) I know it’s kinda pathetic but I totally laughed my ass off in my appartement while reading this chap, totally loved it…by the way “all she wanted to do was fuck her right on the McDonald’s counter in the food court”, where did that come from?? Haha!! lolz

    6. . . . . ~shocked look~ . . . I can’t believe you just stopped . . . I mean I was really into the whole Sharmen scene and you just STOPPED!!! I could seriously have had a heart attack!!! LMFAO!!! Anyways, so I missed out on the last post . . . I left one though ~smiles~ . . . This is an awesome fic and you need to hurry up and post cause I wanna’ know what happens, NOW!!! LOL =D Like always from me, LYLAS ;-p

    9. Too funny. Shane pretending not to be interested in Carmen while she was changing into all those ‘barely there’ lingerie. Plz continue the dressing room scene, more Sharmen luvin’.

    10. Okay, last chapter was great, just too short–lol. I feel totally out of the loop. What other site are you writing for? Is it L Word fanfic, cause I’m kinda a junky :). Wonderful chapter. Wonder what Carmen and Shane will do to keep themselves occupied :).

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