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Consequences
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Rolling her eyes at herself, for being so ridiculously paranoid, Tina set the hair dryer down and opened the door. She looked into the bedroom, taking a tentative step out of the bathroom. She didn’t see anyone, but the room seemed to have an air of someone else having recently been in there. Instinct nudged Tina toward the bedroom’s doorway. She peeked around the corner and her heart stopped. Someone was moving toward the front door. Someone in a sweatshirt with the hood pulled up.
Tina clapped a hand over her mouth and spun around, tripping over her feet as she snatched up the phone and stumbled into the bathroom, locking the door behind her again. With shaking hands she dialled 9-1-1.
“911, what is your emergency?”
“Someone broke into my house. I think they left, but I don’t know if someone else is here. I’m locked in my bathroom.”
“What is your name, ma’am?”
“Tina Kennard. I’m at 1111 Del Mar in Brantwood. Please hurry and send someone!”
“I have a car on the way there ma’am, there are police officers in the area. How did you know someone was in the house?”
Tina recounted her story, hearing the thump, investigating, and seeing the figure ducking out her front door. She spoke barely above a whisper, her voice quavering as her ears strained to hear any noises on the opposite side of the door.
“Ma’am, the police officers are pulling up to the front of your house. They’re going to search the perimeter, but I need you to -”
“I can’t go out there. Don’t ask me to do that. Tell them to break down the door. I’m not coming out until I know it’s safe.”
“Alright ma’am, calm down. Stay with me. You’ll be alright.”
Tina heard male voices calling out downstairs and nearly jumped out of her skin. Before long there was a knock on the bathroom door.
“Ma’am? I’m Officer Pare. Please come out of your bathroom.”
“What should I do?” Tina asked the 9-1-1 operator. “He said his name was Pare.”
“You can open the door. That’s the name of one of the responding officers.”
“Alright.” Tina dropped the phone to her side and addressed the door. “Did you see anyone in the house?”
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Wow that was good, but I don’t think that’s the end, right?
Loved this can’t believe it ended there though… We want more!!!
Enjoyed it, thanks
the end?? noooo lets see what happens please.!!!
Great end!!!!
Another sad story.
That was very well done, and I hope it is truly NOT the end. More please. I hated that episode in their lives and the cowardly way Bette handled it. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you for another very well written story. Reading Tina’s experience was very suspenseful and you really captured me as an audience. In both your stories I have been disappointed in the Bette character because I hope she would not be so cold and heartless to the people she loves most in her life. She made mistakes but I don’t think she was ever that calculating in purposely hurting anyone. I’d rather that Tina found out the way she did at Provocations than to think Bette would send Candace to her house, give her the alarm code and purposely scare her pregnant wife half to death with a home invasion just to cover the affair. That was so cruel, and it also gives more importance to Bette’s affair than just sex with Candace. Spending time and taking pictures meant they had a relationship, and it also showed Bette’s callous disregard for Tina so in that case I agree with the way you ended it. Tina should leave her, never tell her about the baby and go on with her life.
oh wow…why did you end it? please give us more…
The End? I don’t think so…
Excellent. Thank you.
I take that you not a bette fan lol,you made her out to be cruel and viscious in both your stories…good twist though