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Consequences
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“No, ma’am. No one here but us.”
Tina opened the door, saw two cops standing in the bedroom, badges gleaming in the light, and thanked the 9-1-1- operator and hung up. She repeated her story for the officers, who calmly asked her questions and scribbled notes. They let Tina have a minute to get dressed quickly, and then she looked around the house with them in tow, checking for anything that might have been missing. A crime scene team showed up and began to dust the front door and bedroom for prints. It was like something in a bad tv crime show, Tina thought. The whole thing felt surreal.
The cops were still trailing Tina when she wandered back into the bedroom, looking for anything amiss. She looked around, turning in a slow circle. There was something…
“The camera,” Tina said suddenly. “Our camera, it was on my dresser. That’s what’s missing. My partner, she set it out last night when I told her I wanted to take it with me to the community center today. I wanted to get some pics of the kids and volunteers for our website…” Tina trailed off, realizing she was rambling.
“That’s good, ma’am. We were hoping you would remember something. People usually do in situations like this. What kind of camera was it?”
Tina described it and the cop took some more notes.
“When I get back to the station, I’ll file a stolen property report. I doubt we can get your camera back, but we can try.”
“Do you think the intruder will come back?”
“I doubt it, ma’am. But we’ll leave a patrol car in the area tonight. Thieves rarely ever return to the scene of the crime. Tell me something, though, ma’am. You have a pretty advanced alarm system on this house. Why wasn’t the alarm set?”
Tina frowned. “What? I thought it was set. When Bette – that’s my partner – when she left this morning, I could have sworn I set the alarm after her.”
“No, ma’am. The alarm was not on, and the door was open when we got here. Do you remember setting it?”
“Maybe I didn’t…”
“In any case, we’ve got what we need here,” Officer Pare said kindly.
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Wow that was good, but I don’t think that’s the end, right?
Loved this can’t believe it ended there though… We want more!!!
Enjoyed it, thanks
the end?? noooo lets see what happens please.!!!
Great end!!!!
Another sad story.
That was very well done, and I hope it is truly NOT the end. More please. I hated that episode in their lives and the cowardly way Bette handled it. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you for another very well written story. Reading Tina’s experience was very suspenseful and you really captured me as an audience. In both your stories I have been disappointed in the Bette character because I hope she would not be so cold and heartless to the people she loves most in her life. She made mistakes but I don’t think she was ever that calculating in purposely hurting anyone. I’d rather that Tina found out the way she did at Provocations than to think Bette would send Candace to her house, give her the alarm code and purposely scare her pregnant wife half to death with a home invasion just to cover the affair. That was so cruel, and it also gives more importance to Bette’s affair than just sex with Candace. Spending time and taking pictures meant they had a relationship, and it also showed Bette’s callous disregard for Tina so in that case I agree with the way you ended it. Tina should leave her, never tell her about the baby and go on with her life.
oh wow…why did you end it? please give us more…
The End? I don’t think so…
Excellent. Thank you.
I take that you not a bette fan lol,you made her out to be cruel and viscious in both your stories…good twist though