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    Count The Ways

    Story written on August 19, 2007 by AngelDana.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=66620
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    B&T

    The questions I never let myself answer until now.

    Bette’s chest rose sharply with the intake of breath. Tina’s words were hitting her hard. They forced her to feel the things she’d denied herself for so long. It was torture, but Bette was loving the release.

     

    I love the idea of you sat so insecure in that plane seat. You hate the fact that you’re not in control. The plane is someone else’s responsibility and the idea, to you, is frightening. Given the chance, you’d attempt to keep it airborne yourself. You’d try so hard to get it right.

    Your determination:

    The drive to complete every task thrown in your direction.

    Your mindset when you jump feet first into the roughest of challenges.

    The determination with which you fought when you tried to get me back after Candace and Helena.

    At first, Bette laughed aloud, knowing Tina was including her work-life in the description. She abruptly stopped when she remembered how often she left her office late, leaving her love at home alone. As she read the line mentioning the Carpenter, she felt the fury within her rise again.

     

    I know your teeth clenched at Candace’s name. In my mind you swallowed hard and closed your eyes in momentary self-hate; the way you have done every time she is mentioned.

    Your body’s automatic reactions:

    The way your body tensed when I ran my fingers over your every contour.

    The involuntary smile that crosses your lips when you’re playing with our Angel.

    They way your hips bucked when you just couldn’t wait..

    Bette’s mouth ran dry at the final statement. She remembered all too well how many time Tina had drawn out the process, making her wait for the prize.

     

    Ok, so not just your body’s reactions, just your body.

    Your body:

    The body that deserves to be portrayed by the most talented of artists.

    The body that I spend every subconscious minute devouring.

    The only body I want to watch age next to mine. With mine.

    You’ve probably not spoken since you clicked this open. Perhaps a request or two to a flight attendant, but nothing substantial. Nothing to quench my thirst for hearing you speak.

    Your voice:

    The voice that commands so much respect even in the quietest of words.

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    2. Okay Angel, you’d gotten me already with “How we do things here”, but with *THIS*, you went for the kill, girl! Loved it, absolutely loved it! Stand-alones?… Anytime, dear! You are a truly talented writer and you’ve got me on board for whatever fic journey you decide to take us on! Hey, is your name supposed to refer to our dear Dana watching over our B&T from above, or is it related to a real-life name? Sorry, if this is nosey, you really don’t have to answer. Thanks!

    8. It’s not that often that I’ll smile just about the whole way through a post. I really, really liked that, AD. Hope your exam results are what you want them to be, and let me wish you an early Happy Birthday. Thanks for the lovely post.

    11. i am completely and utterly amazed at this chappy……the most amazing i think i have ever read……i cant imagine the time you put into writing this…..and to finally find out that tina is there with her on the phone….just amazing…..i love you for this chapter……it is definately one of a kind….thanx…..

    18. That was the most beautiful posting, and one that deserves MORE. That took a lot of thought and romantic musings. I certainly hope there is more to this, but if not, I completely understand. IT WAS BEAUTIFUL, expressed their love and the devotion they both feel towards the other. I will print this and keep it framed. It deserves it. “The husky tones tht could make a nun sweat with desire.” Now how old did you say you were? You are a sappy romantic like so many of us on this site. Happy Birthday dear. PPS

    21. Double WOW…this was sweet and romantic. I think this story will stick with me for awhile…just breathtaking. For a rough piece this is by far one of your best pieces. keep up the good work.PPS

    23. wow…. beautiful… if that is “rough” … what is “smooth” or “perfect” to you ? LOL !! I would not wish you too many sleepless nights… however… if you really can’t sleep… then… keep writing… I’ll keep reading ;-)

    26. Absolutely Brilliant! Did you say this was “rough”? Damn girl, I can only imagine “perfection” is if your book. LOL! It’s a great stand alone story but I think you could give us a few more chapters? **raising my eyebrows with a questioning look** PS.

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