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Count The Ways
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The harmonic song you release from your lips.
The husky tones that could make a nun sweat with desire.
Bette laughed; she felt her skin flushing. Tina knew exactly how to make her feel these things. She was the only one who ever could.
Have you chuckled yet?
Your chuckle:
The laugh that’s so infectious I’m beaming just imagining it.
The laugh I vowed to cause every day of my life.
The laugh I’m so selfishly glad Jodi will never know.
Bette remained indifferent to Jodi’s mentioning; there was no jump in her gut, no pounding of her heart.
There are quiet tears behind your eyes. And here we are.
Your eyes:
The eyes that open directly onto your soul.
The eyes that make me question every single thing I’ve ever been taught.
The most lovely, perfect.. indescribable eyes I’ll ever know.
Bette smiled knowingly, their eyes had always spoken to each other. It was their silent communication across a crowded room that made them so unique together.
And there you are:
The 17 Reasons your sign requests. It doesn’t matter the number, I only need one;
You.
Though, I might add just one more reason why my love for you grows infinitely..
That was it. Bette shook her head in disbelief. That couldn’t be it. What else had she wanted to say?
“What?!” she cried aloud, not caring who heard. She refreshed her inbox, looking for an ending. A single ping alerted her to the waiting message. Clicking it, she held her breath.
.. You never look behind you on flights.
Bette’s eyes narrowed at the short email.
In spite of herself, she turned in her seat slowly. She didn’t conceal the gasp. Her mouth dropped and fresh tears sprung to her eyes. Sat in front of her was Tina.
Tina was right there. In he seat behind her. At her side, Angelica sat with her tiny hands held to her face in a shushing gesture.
“No speak, Mama B” she mumbled happily.
Bette’s tears ran freely down her face.
“How..?” was all she managed.
“If I learnt anything, it’s that anything is possible with you in mind, Bette”
“But.. why?”
Tina’s smile stretched beyond belief at the second question.
“Because there are more than 17 Reasons Why” she said, simply.
And the kiss they shared on that flight to New York was full of promise. With every meeting of their lips, their souls became further entwined, reconnecting instantly as they made old territory new.
As their hands reacquainted themselves together, they each made the other a solemn vow. They both swore on their own hearts and happiness that they would never let go. The promise ran deeper than their consciousness. It became rooted in their minds. It would affect them every day for the rest of their lives and beyond.
They would never again say goodbye.
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Awww that was so sweet. I love short writings as well as long stories, and that was great!
Okay Angel, you’d gotten me already with “How we do things here”, but with *THIS*, you went for the kill, girl! Loved it, absolutely loved it! Stand-alones?… Anytime, dear! You are a truly talented writer and you’ve got me on board for whatever fic journey you decide to take us on! Hey, is your name supposed to refer to our dear Dana watching over our B&T from above, or is it related to a real-life name? Sorry, if this is nosey, you really don’t have to answer. Thanks!
“The husky tones that could make a nun sweat with desire.” What a brilliant inventory of the wonders of Bette Porter!
That was perfect.
That was just great. Loved Angelica!!! You just keep getting better!
Damn that was amazing and perfect, thank you!
WOW-THAT WAS WONDERFUL
It’s not that often that I’ll smile just about the whole way through a post. I really, really liked that, AD. Hope your exam results are what you want them to be, and let me wish you an early Happy Birthday. Thanks for the lovely post.
SWEET!!! So happy Tina and Boo got Bette back!!
Love Angie,No speak.Mama B You are a great writer. Loved this thanks .
i am completely and utterly amazed at this chappy……the most amazing i think i have ever read……i cant imagine the time you put into writing this…..and to finally find out that tina is there with her on the phone….just amazing…..i love you for this chapter……it is definately one of a kind….thanx…..
WOW…..excellent!
Excellent, just perfect. Thank you for sharing your stories, each one as brilliant as the next. Anxiously awaiting any further postings…
You owe me 3 tissues. XD
Beautiful
Sorry but I have to bow to you!* Milovich bows to AngelDana* Your writting is fantastic! I loved this chapter! :DFantastic chapter and PPS! TFC :D
wow!!! perfect! thanks!
That was the most beautiful posting, and one that deserves MORE. That took a lot of thought and romantic musings. I certainly hope there is more to this, but if not, I completely understand. IT WAS BEAUTIFUL, expressed their love and the devotion they both feel towards the other. I will print this and keep it framed. It deserves it. “The husky tones tht could make a nun sweat with desire.” Now how old did you say you were? You are a sappy romantic like so many of us on this site. Happy Birthday dear. PPS
That was fantastic. The writer here at fanfic have done such a great job with making the season ending what it really should have been. Loved this.
Another great story from our Angel girl. I really don’t know how you do it. Just wonderful!!
Double WOW…this was sweet and romantic. I think this story will stick with me for awhile…just breathtaking. For a rough piece this is by far one of your best pieces. keep up the good work.PPS
Brilliant…”oh my god’ my way to the list of 17 reasons, then there is the “anyting is possible with you in mind”…geez…sure know how to make a lady blush in all places. Brilliant!
wow…. beautiful… if that is “rough” … what is “smooth” or “perfect” to you ? LOL !! I would not wish you too many sleepless nights… however… if you really can’t sleep… then… keep writing… I’ll keep reading ;-)
That was really cute. I almost cried right along with Bette.
That was awesome and beautiful, love it!
Absolutely Brilliant! Did you say this was “rough”? Damn girl, I can only imagine “perfection” is if your book. LOL! It’s a great stand alone story but I think you could give us a few more chapters? **raising my eyebrows with a questioning look** PS.
That was sweet and simple. I loved it. NOone could have done it any better. You’re a great writer ADx. Keep it up.
You really outdid yourself with this one. WOW! Excellent!
Brilliant! Absolutely loved this short story. I typically like the longer tales, but this is perfect as is…thank you for making me smile today!
That was just beautiful, it touched me and I have tears in my eyes as I read it.
that was so sweet and good yay!
Simply amazing. You managed to describe Bette in 17 different scenarios…I can think of at least 200…lol, I loved it. Going to catch up on ur other stuff now
WOW!!! So sweet and wonderful!!!!!!!!!! Thanks PPS
sweet.!!!! wow just amazing its the most beatiful story I`ve read in this site..
WOW! One of the best I’ve ever read. Thank you for taking the time to write this beautiful account of all the many reasons why B&T love is so beautiful.