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Cruel Intentions – Introductions Part 1
“Hey wait up!” She called. “Thank you.”
“Don’t thank me. Trust me when I say that I didn’t do you a favor. Helena will still hate you at lunch.”
“Well maybe I won’t eat lunch with you guys.” Alice said tiring of the way that these girls talked to her.
“Yes you will.” Bette stated.
“How the ***** do you know?”
“You like Gabby.” Bette turned and looked her in the eye and there was no way that Alice could deny that she did in fact like the arrogant girl. “It’s ok, everyone always does. Just be careful, Helena can be a real *****. And so can Gabby.” Alice had never heard anyone talk about their friends this way before.
“Aren’t you guys friends?”
“Not the way you say it.” And with that Bette turned toward the front of the classroom that they had just entered and ignored her for the rest of the class.
Alice looked irritatingly over at the skinny blonde kid and tried for the third time to get him to go away. “Who are you?” She asked, aggravated that he was still following her around this time with a camera in her face.
The camera dropped and Alice couldn’t help think that even though he was slightly goofy he was also slightly cute. He smiled. “I’m Mark. Mark Wheeler.” He held out his free hand and moved his camera off to the side. “Just wanted to get the scoop on the new girl. You know for the yearbook.” Mark held up the camera and looked at her expectantly.
“No.” Alice said seriously. “I don’t think so.”
“Suit yourself.” Mark shrugged. “But I think that I should let you know that I plan on being famous one day. You should let me be your friend now so later when I’m loaded then you won’t have to say to yourself, ‘Gee, I wish I would have been nicer to that Mark kid.’”
“Whatever. Could you please stop with the camera. Then we can talk.”
Mark shrugged. “OK.” He said, not really wanting to film her just wanting to meet her. He thought she was cute. “So what brings you here?” Mark asked as he set down his camera and sat down in the desk in front of her.
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(38 votes, average: 3.34 out of 5)
this if fucking awesome meth!!! luv it continue soon!
awesome story! love the concept, love the characters, love the writing. keep it up and dont leave us waiting too long!! :)
oh this is the best fanfic ive ever read!! hope you post soon :o) xx
LMAO this is fucking awesome and how really funny is it that alice is from napa, dude she could of been my neighbor LOL.
LOL, goood stuff, can’t wait for the next post!!!
Hey, where’s Mr. Piddles?
This is a great start on this story..LOVE IT…Thanks..
Keep going, its good. Cruel Intentions and Dangerous Liasons are actually both based on Shakespears “The Taming of the Shrew” Change the title, and maybe add a few more witty sarcastic quips please.
wow that was great please continue!!!!!
LOL this is great! Wonderful adapation of the cruel intentions, I kep cracking up at Dana the virgin.
ROTFLMO. This is a great take on my fav guilty pleasure.
I love this! this is hilarious! it has almost everyone! But where is Kit, and Carmen and Shane? Please continue. I love this story alot.
It’s the movie – yet new&improoved version..Great Sexci stry!..’Cruel Intentions’ is Hot – this is SCORCHING..I would definitely pay 2 watch this..Sum of these kids may be swt..But they not that Swt..Bad gurlz&Bad boiz – I like it..Dana – ideal candidate 4 perfect innocent virgin?..I dun think Dana&Tina r as swt&innocent as they play out?..& if Dane is straight(SO gay)&Al looses the bet, in the end it’s still a win-win situation..I expect sum crazy sexci scenarios in the future for these cats..Like is Shane in this?..MarinA&orCarmeN?..Jenny with Tim?..w.e you write..Thnk u, I’m looking forward 2 it..I love the way you write..Thnx 4 writing, dun stop..PLEASE mst Post so0N..
Hey, this is a great start. I wasn’t sure if the situation change would work but it does. You write the characters so well, I think the story would still be good even if the situation didn’t fit. Thank you.
great beginning! please post soon!
Great Start! Cruel Intentions is one of my favorite movies as well as the orginal it was adapted from (Dangerous Liasons). I was trying to figure you out the two main and I got it! :) Great job and can’t wait for the next installment
Hey crystalmeth this is great made me giggle the whole way through you’ve pinned everyone down really well – hope to see the next part soon
That’s one “fucking” amazing story you’ve got there. I love it. Pleas continue. I just hope that Alica doesn’t has to sleep with Helena. But if you follow the movie she wins. so that’s cool. Thank u for this great story, but that’s only so if everything goes perfect with Bette and Tina. Please post soon, love the story if i havent said it before
This story is so fucking good and funny, great start and all the characters in here is so funny and love the way it is. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Thisis really good. I enjoyed it a lot and if you don’t post somemore I think I might cry! Cruel Intentions is one of my favortie movies!
This is very funny, thanks for the idea. Helena, Helena everybody knows that Dana is Aice’s girl and viceversa, lol. Waiting for the next.
“Why not?” Bette asked. “The girl is hot even if she is a walking disaster.” LOL! you NAILED the characters!
i’m LOVING THIS!!! really looking forward to the next chapter (don’t forget about How Hard Can it Be? though!! )
i’m totally loving it…it’s a great twist on the movie. Where’s Shane? and Kit? and Carmen? and I don’t know but I have a pretty good feeling we’ll be seeing some of Lara later on. Keep it up….it’s fucking hilarious
ROTFLMAO this is great hope you continue and post soon!!
crystal – great job. i love it. i love how you’ve integrated so many characters. haven’t seen cruel intentions in forever – but its one of my favorites – not i need to go watch it. as always, you’re an amazing writer.
k. this is just way too fun. lol. i love it.