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Cure-all, Chapter 10
Fascinated by the boat, Carmen was dying to go onboard and have a closer look.
"May I?" She asked Mark.
"Sure! Wait, let me help you…"
The young man helped Carmen as she stepped onboard. Then he turned to Bette, holding his hand out.
"Oh, huh… I’m fine… I think I’ll just… stay here… On the deck… On the well-grounded deck!" She asserted, with an anxious smile.
"Okay, sure. No problem." Mark said, giving her a knowing smile.
Bette glared at him and stood up straight, trying to look dignified. Which she failed miserably and Mark burst out laughing.
Meanwhile, Carmen had reached the front of the boat where Shane was standing, her back to her, pulling on a rope that was attached to the sail. She admired her for a while, then got a bit closer.
Shane heard steps behind her.
"Mark, can you hold onto this rope for me while I check the other side? But watch it, it’s very…" Her words trailed off when she turned around and realized that it wasn’t her friend she was speaking to.
The stunning beauty of the tanned girl standing before her left her speechless and for a moment, she forgot to hold the rope which instantly slipped out of her hands. Carmen saw this and jumped towards Shane to catch it just in time. In her rescue, she collided with Shane and would have fallen over if the brunette hadn’t grabbed her firmly around the waist. She suddenly found herself in Shane’s arms, mere inches from her face, with only the rebellious rope separating them.
"Hi…" Shane whispered hoarsely.
"Hi back…" Carmen retorted with a smile.
They looked at each other for a while, then Shane reluctantly let the young woman out of her arms, and smiled shyly.
"I’m Shane… Thanks, huh… for the rope." She said.
"Oh…" Carmen realized that she still had the said rope in her hand, "Sure…" She said returning it to the brunette with a smile.
"I’m Carmen…" She continued, "I came with Bette."
Shane’s smile faded,
"Oh…" She said, looking away.
Shane’s reaction made Carmen realize what her words may have implied.
"We met at my sister’s wedding" She added quickly, "She gave me a ride back… That’s all…" Her words trailed off on the last part, but they made Shane’s heart leap.
"Well, it’s a pleasure to meet you, Carmen." She said flashing a smile.
"The pleasure is all mine, Captain" The latin woman answered, playfully giving her the salute.
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(2 votes, average: 3.50 out of 5)
I’m so excited you posted…yea!! What a wonderful way you had Shane and Carmen meet. I guess Bette and Shane fell in love with their soul mates in a matter of seconds. pps
yep, took bette only 1 second to fall in love with tina…post soon
Psh, it took Bette less than 1 second. lol I actually liked the Sharmen in this. Okay time for Bette to take some tango lessons. ;)
gorgeous, but short update!! well it wasnt that hsort but im always left wanting more! PPS!
we want moreeeeeee. bette is so in love haha. sharman are cutie
Well, at least it didn’t take Bette and Tina 525 600 minutes apparently… ( wink ). So anyway, it seems Bette’s not too fond of boats herself, huh ?… What a chicken ! But she’s so cute and funny ! Very very nice, albeit short, chapter, K. Truth is Noresistance is absolutely right, it’s not so much the fact that the chapters are brief, it’s the fact that we’re always left wanting much much more. I guess that’s what doctors refer to as ” an addiction ” or in this specific case as the first symptoms of Tibette deprivation. LOL ! Thank you, K. In fact, you must know that my personal doctor prescribed me Tibetthadone in heavy doses lately et tout oubli/entorse dans mon calendrier de prise de médicaments pourrait sans doute m’être fatal…
I LOVE this story, amazing really can’t wait for more! PPS
How couldn’t fall in love with Tina hahaha. This was great.PPS
Good story, good writing
minutes… mere minutes… now get bette those dance lessons and back to tina… maybe to check on the pony.. any reason for her to go back…PPS
“Bette smiled softly. How much time does one need to fall in love? How many minutes? How many seconds?…”SOOOO sweet Kword. Can’t wait for you to with this incredibly romantic story. Thanks for posting.
I dont know who fell in love quickest. Just hope that Bette doesn’t get hurt.
It doesn’t take that long at all to fall in love, as I think Bette has found out. Great story, KW, thanks for the chapter. pps
Maybe Carmen will be of some help with Bette and Tina. She seems to know her half-sister well enough to know that Tina would be much happier with Bette.
I just found this story and absolutely adore it!!! The storyline is original and strong…your writing is engaging and very strong…and I am excited about the next chapter!! Thanks!!
That was wonderful and Shane meet Carmen. Let Bette and Tina meet again!