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Cure-all, Chapter 28
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“You can’t come in!” Tina said in low voice, staring at the cigar-smoking man. Then, she repeated louder and in Spanish, for the other soldiers’ benefit, “No pueden entrar!”
Her heart was pounding so hard that she could hear it…
She was afraid…
But her resolved face didn’t give anything away.
The captain was looking at her straight in the eye.
“You cannot come in.” She repeated once again, staring back at him.
She saw the machine guns raise and point at her… She heard the triggers…
And in that moment, there was only one thing on her mind…
One person…
Bette…
CHAPTER 28
There was a lull in the uproar of gunfire and explosions. Then a long, very long silence, during which nobody made a single move. It only lasted a few minutes, but to Tina it felt like an eternity.
Then suddenly, the captain spitted his old cigar to the ground and said with a nasty smile.
“Fine, Senora! If I can’t get in., then you… You can’t get out!”
With that, he shouted some orders and two soldiers closed the gate in front of Tina. Then he burst out laughing and brought another cigar to his teeth, never taking his eyes off her.
She slowly walked back to the house.
She felt exhausted all of a sudden. What would become of the children? She didn’t even know if they had anything to feed them with…
“God, Tina…” James sighed when she got back in, “That was a close one.”
She looked up at him.
“We’re stuck in…” She murmured.
“I know…” He replied in a serious tone.
“No phone, I suppose?” She inquired.
He shook his head.
The blonde let out a deep sigh. For the first time, she felt really defeated.
“No phone, and I don’t know about food yet. We’re besieged here with no way of communicating with the outside world.
“No way…?” Max intervened, “I don’t think so…” He said, holding up his video camera.
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She was standing on the staircase with the children all around her. Max had only asked her to start her message with ‘This is a call for help…’
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my my your pure evil for stoping there!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I had this feeling it would be Bette… well, at least they’re together now! It makes me somewhat calmer knowing that whatever’s gonna happen, they’ll face it together. You really enjoy torturing us, don’t you? So mean… lol. Can’t wait for the next chapter!Also, I want to say that you have my biggest respect for being so brave and doing humanitarian work and helping people in need. *hands you a rose* ;)
gosh i thought it was tina who got knocked over w/ the gun. ur good!! im glad they returned bette, she’ll make it. i was going to go terminator on u *** if u wrote that she had died but reading ur cliff notes for the next chapter… bette is strong, especially w/ tina next to her =) can’t wait for ur nxt post. pps
man, you know how to get me on the edge of my seat…drama-rama…bette better be okay
hmmm… you really enjoy teasing us, don’t you?! another great chapter! PPS
Wow, that was tense. Who better to take care of Bette than Tina. I hope they find food, and really find each other. Great chapter, and PPS.
the only things that keep me calm at this moment is knowing that they will fight it together!!
can’t believe you let us hang there…. pps!
Ouch! That hurt, to stop right there! I kinda thought it might be Bette. I salute your humanitarian work, you are a very brave woman.
ohhhhh come on – you did not just stop there!!?? gosh – u are such a tease!! what can I do to make u post RIGHT NOW!?? please tell me – u got to post – its holidayweekend after all!! so, please please PRETTY PLEASE post sooooooooooon!!! :) Thanks!Lovely chapter by the way! :)
I hope they find some food and most importantly, a way to help Bette! PPS
This happens in so many war zones If Bette,Kit,Jamesand Tina are together Bette will get better. The best is there and they will do the very best with what they have to help Bette. WLove this story and the way you keep us on the edge of our seats. thanks so much for posting
Ohhhhh…that was not nice. Hurry back to that laptop and give us more. ; ) pps
Your story is wonderfull. Thank You! It is so much better than going to the movies.. And has a great music too!Ooblivion keeps playing in my head through out your narration..
Oh please let Bette be ok!
That was just plain wrong..so very, very wrong!
Oh, my God ! Bette ! I knew it, I knew it, I hadn’t thought of Max ( like James & Tina ) at all… But how in the Hell did she get there ?… I mean, are these soldiers part of the same group that perpetrated the massacre at the lazaretto ? … What were the chances of Bette ending up here ?… OMG ! And what did they do to her ?!!… However, as amazing as this is going to sound from me, I’m almost relieved it’s Bette and not Max, first because as Xella said, at least B & T are going to be together and be able to “fight” together, and second because if Max had been caught they most likely would have all been killed by now. He pretty much seems like their only hope… BRILLIANT CHAPTER, K !! This is simply AMAAAAAZING ! I can’t wait to find out what the bastards have done to our Bette…
On a much lifghter note… When all this is over, I think Bette and Tina should adopt little Sebastian… (Wink!). Well, actually, I was going to say they should adopt all the kids, but there are like 9 of them, so unless they decide to open another orphanage…