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Cure-all, Chapter 27
CHAPTER 27
The car had just passed a big gate above which beautiful forged steel letters read “Orphelinat Joseph Stahl”.
James had been silent for a while now, and Tina could feel his tension. She had to admit that she wasn’t so relaxed herself. After her brief but memorable encounter with Bette, she had been floating on cloud nine for the major part of the trip. But now, reality was starting to catch up with her and her concern grew as they got closer to their destination.
They reached a beautiful old building and James stopped the car. The place was very quiet and seemed deserted. James didn’t move and signaled Tina to stay silent for a moment.
“This is odd.” He said softly.
The blonde turned to him.
“What?” She inquired as softly.
“This silence… This is an orphanage, it’s two in the afternoon, and the weather couldn’t be nicer… Where are the kids?” He said, looking at Tina.
The blonde didn’t reply and looked around. James was right, something wasn’t normal.
“Let’s go in.” She told him.
“Tina, to be honest, I’d rather take you back to the hotel.” He said frowning.
“No way!” Tina retorted, “Whatever is going on, I want to make sure the children are okay.”
James shook his head and sighed.
“Why am I not even surprised?”
He reached for the glove compartment, and pulled a gun out.
“James!” Tina exclaimed, then in a lower voice, “You have a gun?”
“Here?… Who doesn’t?” He replied with a smirk, before getting out of the car.
As they reached the door, they noticed that it was slightly opened… James motioned to Tina to stay behind him and they entered.
They found themselves in a huge hallway, with a large staircase leading upstairs. The deafening silence that filled the building was now oppressive and frightening.
Tina noticed a sign that said “bust’s room” and signaled James to follow her. They walked along a large corridor that led them to another room. They slowly stepped in.
“Oh my God!” Tina exclaimed with horror.
“Fuck…” James uttered softly.
Nothing could have prepared them for the terrible scene that awaited them.
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(4 votes, average: 4.25 out of 5)
this is truly an amazing story! can’t wait for the next chapter. i am totally captivated! PPS!
this is truly one of the most amazing stories i have read! it it sucha thrilling tale.. please continue asap.
wow… you write like you were in this position before… i like that tina is not scared of these “Men”… i know you will keep her and bette safe… and james… PPS
I’m loving this story. Don’t keep us waiting too long for an update!
Hopefully Tina finds her way to Bette soon, but without bullet holes please! PPS
This story, or one like it, plays out somewhere every day and mostly without those of strong principles. We are truly blessed here in the USA
Wow I will wait with baited breath for the next post. Tina is playing with fire and there is nothing that will stop him from shooting her right where she stands. God Tina that I don’t know if I know how to be that brave. Great story k I love all the infectious disease tidbits.
don’t let anything happen to Tina please… wonderful chapter, pps!
wow very well written. I am sure this is as close as how it is in some of these countries.
oh come on… you can’t stop there… I love this story pleeeaaaase continue asap
Wow, that was fantastic. Can’t wait to see what happens next. PPS.
You write like you were in the war zone before. Love that our Tina is so very brave.When she is afraid she thinks of Bette, I been very ill, so help make me get better quicker and post very soon. thanks
OMG….how can you leave us like that. Please give us more soon.
Damn, Tina is brave or maybe not using her brain. Tina did something that most people will not do and that is to stand up and fight against the all out war. The sound of the trigger is not a good sign.
So you do have a thing for cliffies after all, huh ?… That’s just cruel !… LOL ! This chapter was absolutely ( fu..ing ) thrilling, K ! To me there are no other words to describe it. As for your characters… Well, I love this brave and incredibly strong Tina ( no matter how scared she must be inside ) and as crazy as this may sound I’m starting to fear even more for Bette than for Tina right now… I wonder what might have happened to her when she tried to get to the Embassy earlier… Especially since she was alone from what I gathered. She didn’t have a James or a Max Sweeney to “escort” her… Did I mention before how much I loved James, btw ? Fantastic chapter, Kword. Please don’t torture us too long, I can already tell the wait for next chapter is going to be excruciating.
This story is so realistic I have chills up and down my spine..Tina is really brave, God bless her
Bette where are you, come and resuce Tina!
WOW…go, Tina!!!
Puh…wow! Oxygen please! I was holding my breath almost the whole chapter! Amazing! Ant Tina is so strong and fearless…wow, wow, wow!!! Brilliant writing. Thanks for sharing your great talent with us. May I ask you a question? You don’t have to answer if it’s too personal. Were you in a war zone at some point in your life? I’m just curious because your writing seems so realistic.