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Cure-all, Chapter 38
And there she was…
Right before her eyes… Beautiful… Glowing… Magnificent…
… The love of her life.
Her Tina.
There she was, mere feet away, staring back at her and looking just as entranced as she herself was.
“Tina…” She whispered hoarsely, as the overwhelming emotions started to form a lump in her throat.
She had dreamt about this moment for so long, yet now that it was there, she was suddenly paralyzed by disbelief and the intensity of what she was feeling.
Tina seemed like transfixed as well. But the look of surprise that had first appeared on her face had slowly turned into a look of wonderment, and she was now gazing at the brunette with loving eyes.
Finally recovering from her initial shock, Bette started to register the amazing reality of what was happening, and a soft smile started to spread across her face.
Alice looked at Tina, then at Bette, then at Tina again, and she was about to make one of her witty remarks, when it suddenly dawn on her…
… For the next few seconds, the past few weeks unfolded in her mind’s eye, and slowly, the pieces started to fit together.
Holy shit!
She looked at her two friends again… On their faces, she saw it all. And it was so blinding that she mentally kicked the journalist in her that hadn’t seen anything before.
Her daze lasted a few moments until she realized that, if the women’s reaction to each other as well as their current state were anything to go by, something phenomenal was about to happen between them…
… Which basically made her one too many.
“Uh… Guys, I’m just gonna… uh… go back to the hotel.” She said, loud enough to be heard, but not so that she would break the moment, “I have this, uh… thing… to do… Yeah, I’d totally forgotten about it… You know, with the jetlag and everything…”
She started to walk away,
“So, anyway, uh… Tina, you know where to find me, so… Yeah. Well, uh… I’ll just go, okay?… Okay… Right… Whatever…”
When Bette and Tina didn’t reply, keeping their eyes on each other, Alice just smiled and shook her head before she turned around and started towards the stairs. There, she stopped, looked at the huge drop of steps down to the bottom, then turned right and with a smirk, headed to the public lift.
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(3 votes, average: 4.00 out of 5)
im so happyyyyyyyyyyyy that was so sweetttttttttt alice nice job
I’m doing a big happy dance, Fate will play for awhile then she will come to her sense and the the magic will beginning and so it did. Love longing and needing has ended. thanks
Great, thank you. More soon?
i don’t know why but wow I was on the edge of my seat..
Hell yeah! That’s what I’m talking about. Simply amazing! PPS:)
Absolutely terrific. You couldn’t have done it any better, thank you!
Finally! AWW they are so sweet together I’m glad Al could see what was happening and gave them some alone time. Can’t wait for the next chapter. PPS
Finally! AWW they are so sweet together I’m glad Al could see what was happening and gave them some alone time. Can’t wait for the next chapter. PPS
Hallelujah!!! PPS
YAY!!! They are finally free to love one another! Can’t wait to see where you take us. PPS
You had me worried, but the ending was just so perfect and sweet. Their long-awaited declaration of love was certainly worth the wait. No cliches, just kudos to your writing!
I hope that TBC actually meant “To Be Continued very soon” ’cause I’m not sure I’m gonna be able to wait too long here. Oh, and by the way, I don’t think it was full of clichés at all. The Eiffel tower, Notre Dame, les bateaux mouches or les quais de Seine, that would have been the biggest clichés in my opinion, but La Butte Montmartre, no, not so much. Besides, who cares ?!! I mean, really, I absolutely loved Amelie Poulain and it was full of enormous clichés about Paris ( including those about Montmartre of course ). Do I need to say that I loved this chapter ? Once again, you’ve outdone yourself my friend ! BRAVO !
OK, one more thing, I know my comment won’t make me very poplular among your legions of fans, and I myself wrote that I wanted more of this because I’ve really enjoyed reading this story A LOT and therefore I somehow never want this to stop, but if I’m honest, ” dramatically speaking ” I think this could be a beautiful ending to a wonderful story and I think you could very well leave it as it is. But of course I won’t be one to complain when you post your next chapter ( wink ! ). Author’s call !
I was getting a little nervous here. For a minute or so, I felt like they were going to continue to miss each other. I was pleasantly surprised by their coming together and the ending of this post.
Hey you! First and foremost, I apologize for the delay. Apparently I missed a few updates of my favourite stories and I didn’t even notice. I posted last week and didn’t get a chance to check what was going here until today. Anyway, amazing update… you had me (as usual) on the edge of my seat. I was almost screaming at Bette and Alice “Look up, Look up!” Yeah I get overly excited by your story. LOL Can’t wait to see what you have in store for those ladies. Take care… oh and yes you have me kinda forgotten I think! :o)
That was beautiful and love it!
Yeah!!, awright, (fist pumping in the air), Tony Danza style. PPS
Haaaaallllejuha! Woopdeedoo! Huzzah!
I agree with all the other comments. Amazingly Perfect and Beautiful Chapter! After everything that they have been through this was just the perfect place for them to express their feelings. I LOVE THIS STORY! I swear i was so lost in the last few pages i was nervous just to read on. Thank you for not making it a cliffhanger. I can’t wait to read more ! PPS
in one of my stories i had B&T in Paris too, as bette proposed at Sacre Couer…i’m a hopeless romantic, i don’t care about cliches…this was beautiful, magnifique, breathtaking…
Perfect!!!! yeh!!!
i felt like pulling my hair when by page 3 fate was still playing tricks on them! but their meeting and declaration took my breath away! PPS
Absolutely beautiful. You had me holding my breath in anticipation at all the missed opportunities for these two to connect but in the end you deliverd romance at it’s finest. Now, back to the hotel for some NC-17 lovin’, right Kword?
This story continues to blow me away. God, I love it so….I can’t wait for your next post!
thank god… i was with ther others… what luck to keep missing each other… but i had faith… love this story…PPS
Wow-ze..Perfect!~
Finaly – God this was a long way. I hope you write much more of this two one. They are so in LOVE. PPS
Holy Mother of God – finally!!! Woot!! Now for a little lovin’, right???
Awww… that was so beautiful! I’m glad you chose not to tease us to death with them passing by each other lol. I gotta admit, Alice leaving them alone surprised me a bit :) Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us.
I love cliches..nothing at all wrong with them…what girl doesn’t want to be in love and in Paris. thanks. pps