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Cure-all, Chapter 38
She held her breath… Bette didn’t even touch her, but she could feel the addictive warmth of her body and the soothing rate of her breathing very close to her ear. She closed her eyes and reveled into the brunette’s presence. In that instant, she knew that for the rest of her life, and whatever the time or the place, the intensity of the amazing feelings created by Bette’s proximity would never alter… Ever.
The brunette closed the distance between them and softly nuzzled her hair. Very slowly, she let one hand slide along the blonde’s arm, leaving goosebumps after its passage, while her other hand gently caught Tina’s and intertwined their fingers sensually.
Tina let out a deep sigh and pressed her body back into Bette. She wanted to turn around and face the brunette but she couldn’t bring herself to move from this heavenly position quite yet.
They stayed like that for a few seconds, then Bette lowered her lips to the blonde’s ear, and placing the most delicate kiss just below her earlobe, she murmured,
“Come with me…”
Tina had barely registered the words when the brunette caught her left hand and dragged her along with her through the heavy crowd of tourists building up around them.
Surprised at first, the blonde quickly recovered and let herself revel in the wonderful feeling of Bette’s strong hand in hers as she confidently took her away from the crowd, away from prying eyes. The sensation was so exhilarating that she was soon grinning like a teenager as she followed Bette to wherever she had decided to take her. Her heart was pounding, and she started to feel the flush in her face. Because of the fast walking?… Maybe. Because of her emotions and the anticipation of what was to come?… Most probably. But she didn’t care. She was happy. And she knew this was only the beginning…
Bette didn’t have to take them too far away. She loved Montmartre and had come often enough in the past to know of some lovely little streets, unknown of and hardly visited by the tourists.
They reached a small street along which a stoned balustrade overlooked the same view as the one they had from the Basilica. It was a dead end street at the end of which some old stairs descended to another street. The top of the stairs offered a nice plunging perspective of the streets below and two old benches had been placed there a long time ago as the viewpoint’s imperturbable guardians.
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(3 votes, average: 4.00 out of 5)
im so happyyyyyyyyyyyy that was so sweetttttttttt alice nice job
I’m doing a big happy dance, Fate will play for awhile then she will come to her sense and the the magic will beginning and so it did. Love longing and needing has ended. thanks
Great, thank you. More soon?
i don’t know why but wow I was on the edge of my seat..
Hell yeah! That’s what I’m talking about. Simply amazing! PPS:)
Absolutely terrific. You couldn’t have done it any better, thank you!
Finally! AWW they are so sweet together I’m glad Al could see what was happening and gave them some alone time. Can’t wait for the next chapter. PPS
Finally! AWW they are so sweet together I’m glad Al could see what was happening and gave them some alone time. Can’t wait for the next chapter. PPS
Hallelujah!!! PPS
YAY!!! They are finally free to love one another! Can’t wait to see where you take us. PPS
You had me worried, but the ending was just so perfect and sweet. Their long-awaited declaration of love was certainly worth the wait. No cliches, just kudos to your writing!
I hope that TBC actually meant “To Be Continued very soon” ’cause I’m not sure I’m gonna be able to wait too long here. Oh, and by the way, I don’t think it was full of clichés at all. The Eiffel tower, Notre Dame, les bateaux mouches or les quais de Seine, that would have been the biggest clichés in my opinion, but La Butte Montmartre, no, not so much. Besides, who cares ?!! I mean, really, I absolutely loved Amelie Poulain and it was full of enormous clichés about Paris ( including those about Montmartre of course ). Do I need to say that I loved this chapter ? Once again, you’ve outdone yourself my friend ! BRAVO !
OK, one more thing, I know my comment won’t make me very poplular among your legions of fans, and I myself wrote that I wanted more of this because I’ve really enjoyed reading this story A LOT and therefore I somehow never want this to stop, but if I’m honest, ” dramatically speaking ” I think this could be a beautiful ending to a wonderful story and I think you could very well leave it as it is. But of course I won’t be one to complain when you post your next chapter ( wink ! ). Author’s call !
I was getting a little nervous here. For a minute or so, I felt like they were going to continue to miss each other. I was pleasantly surprised by their coming together and the ending of this post.
Hey you! First and foremost, I apologize for the delay. Apparently I missed a few updates of my favourite stories and I didn’t even notice. I posted last week and didn’t get a chance to check what was going here until today. Anyway, amazing update… you had me (as usual) on the edge of my seat. I was almost screaming at Bette and Alice “Look up, Look up!” Yeah I get overly excited by your story. LOL Can’t wait to see what you have in store for those ladies. Take care… oh and yes you have me kinda forgotten I think! :o)
That was beautiful and love it!
Yeah!!, awright, (fist pumping in the air), Tony Danza style. PPS
Haaaaallllejuha! Woopdeedoo! Huzzah!
I agree with all the other comments. Amazingly Perfect and Beautiful Chapter! After everything that they have been through this was just the perfect place for them to express their feelings. I LOVE THIS STORY! I swear i was so lost in the last few pages i was nervous just to read on. Thank you for not making it a cliffhanger. I can’t wait to read more ! PPS
in one of my stories i had B&T in Paris too, as bette proposed at Sacre Couer…i’m a hopeless romantic, i don’t care about cliches…this was beautiful, magnifique, breathtaking…
Perfect!!!! yeh!!!
i felt like pulling my hair when by page 3 fate was still playing tricks on them! but their meeting and declaration took my breath away! PPS
Absolutely beautiful. You had me holding my breath in anticipation at all the missed opportunities for these two to connect but in the end you deliverd romance at it’s finest. Now, back to the hotel for some NC-17 lovin’, right Kword?
This story continues to blow me away. God, I love it so….I can’t wait for your next post!
thank god… i was with ther others… what luck to keep missing each other… but i had faith… love this story…PPS
Wow-ze..Perfect!~
Finaly – God this was a long way. I hope you write much more of this two one. They are so in LOVE. PPS
Holy Mother of God – finally!!! Woot!! Now for a little lovin’, right???
Awww… that was so beautiful! I’m glad you chose not to tease us to death with them passing by each other lol. I gotta admit, Alice leaving them alone surprised me a bit :) Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us.
I love cliches..nothing at all wrong with them…what girl doesn’t want to be in love and in Paris. thanks. pps