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Damaged Ch. 33
Some girl I met last night at The Planet. Shane ran her hands down her face.
What happened between you and Carmen? Shane leaned back in her chair.
Two nights ago, I was at The Planet, and I ran into my boss. Carmen was working, and my boss Brooke wanted to dance. So I thought why not. So we were dancing, and she kissed me. I pushed her away, but Carmen saw us kissed. She wouldnt let me explain and then she ran out. I went after her and tried to explain, but she figured that I cheated on her. And of course, I did. So she broke up with me.
Shane, Im sorry. Have you talked to her at all?
I tried, but she found someone already. I miss her, and I want her back. This is my first time in life wanting to be in relationship with someone I truly love.
Why dont you go see her and try to talk to her again.
I dont know if I should.
Shane, if you really love someone, you dont let them go that easy. You fight for what you want, dont take her for granted. Shane looked at Alice and smiled.
Thank you for that Al, for now on, I think youre the one who is Yoda. Alice smiled at Shane.
Alright, I think I should be leaving. I have a lot of stuff to do. Alice started to get up from the table and headed for the door. Shane got up also and put her bowl in the sink. She walked up behind Alice and stood next to the door.
Well, I probably head over to Carmens later. Thanks again Al.
Anytime. They gave each other a hug, and Alice headed out of the door. Shane closed the door and headed for her room.
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Dana woke up and turned over. She smiled when she saw Lara by her side. She slid closer to her and put her arm on her waist. She moved Laras hair from her face and caresses her face. Lara slowly stirred in her sleep and sighed. Dana kissed Lara slowly and stared at her lover. Lara started to open her eyes and smiled.
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well as a fellow FFIC
My last message was messed up SORRY but as i was saying i really liked your story i like the way it sticks to the script and doesnt over do the lines of DERANGED as a fellow fanfic author i must say MAGNIFICO!! cant wait till the next chapter
Hooray! Shane & Carmen are back together. Thought Shane would suffer longer, but I did feel sorry for her. Hope the chick she slept with doesn’t come back to screw up her & Carmen. Also hope Shane gets her hormones in check. Great as usual.
yeah carmen and shane are back, thats great.
but hey, the alice and mark thing..I don´t think that they fit together.
Oh no,please Tina be alright. Yippe! Shane and Carmen are back together, and I agree Alice and Mark don’t fit together. Another great chapter,thank you. See ya soon.
I think it all works. Shane & Carmen… so hot. Alice and Mark… looking forward to a tender love afair. Please let Tina be well.
I love it and I am still sad that dana said that she could not be with alice just because she is having a baby most people take life as it come some run and hind and that is what dana has done she has gone to run and hide behide lara and I feel that there is still some twists to come please post very soon
AkiraCB,OMG what a way to end. Very ominous.
Can’t wait to see your next installment.
A fan.