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Damaged Ch. 33
Im about to cummmm Carmen dragged on. Shane sucked on Carmens neck and pinched her bud. Carmen dragged her nails across Shanes back, and she fell back onto her bed. Shane dropped on top of Carmens chest, trying to catch her breath. Carmen slowly ran her fingers through Shanes short mane. Shane lifted up and kissed Carmen slowly. She smiled and laid back down. She wrapped her arm around her waist.
I love you Carmen.
I love you more.
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Tina was walking back to the parking lot, on the phone with Bette.
I love you tooIll see you soonBye. Tina put her phone in her purse and grabbed her keys. She walked up to her car and dropped her keys. She bent down and grabbed them from off the ground. She got up and jumped.
What are you doing here?
I just wanted to see how you were doing. Is that alright?
No, its not alright. Helena, I dont want anything to do with you. just leave me alone.
Tina, calm down. I just want us to be friends.
I dont want you in my life whatsoever. Leave me and my family alone. Tina opened her door and tried to get in her car. Helena stopped her and pushed her against the car. She grabbed Tinas face and kissed her roughly. Tina tried to fight off Helena, but fell into it. She stopped and pushed Helena away.
Dont do this, I have a family. Dont ruin this for me.
Tina, I know what you want. But youre trying to hide it. you know you still want to be with me.
I dont want to be with you. I have what I want, and she makes me scream her name unlike you did. Tina got into her car, and Helena stood back. Tina backed up and drove off. She turned on her wipers, it was raining heavy. On her way down the street, Tinas phone rings. She reached into her purse and grabbed her phone. She flipped it open and put to her phone.
Hello?
T, baby where are you? Bette said on the other line.
Im on my way home. I should be there shortly.
Just make it home safe, its raining like crazy.
I know babe, Im being safe. Ill see you in a little bit.
Alright, I love you.
Love you too. Bye.
Bye. Tina flipped her phone and tried to put it back in her purse, but dropped it. Damn it. Tina bent over and reached for a phone and grabbed it. She looked up and saw red lights. She slammed on her breaks, and everything went black.
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well as a fellow FFIC
My last message was messed up SORRY but as i was saying i really liked your story i like the way it sticks to the script and doesnt over do the lines of DERANGED as a fellow fanfic author i must say MAGNIFICO!! cant wait till the next chapter
Hooray! Shane & Carmen are back together. Thought Shane would suffer longer, but I did feel sorry for her. Hope the chick she slept with doesn’t come back to screw up her & Carmen. Also hope Shane gets her hormones in check. Great as usual.
yeah carmen and shane are back, thats great.
but hey, the alice and mark thing..I don´t think that they fit together.
Oh no,please Tina be alright. Yippe! Shane and Carmen are back together, and I agree Alice and Mark don’t fit together. Another great chapter,thank you. See ya soon.
I think it all works. Shane & Carmen… so hot. Alice and Mark… looking forward to a tender love afair. Please let Tina be well.
I love it and I am still sad that dana said that she could not be with alice just because she is having a baby most people take life as it come some run and hind and that is what dana has done she has gone to run and hide behide lara and I feel that there is still some twists to come please post very soon
AkiraCB,OMG what a way to end. Very ominous.
Can’t wait to see your next installment.
A fan.