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Damaged Ch. 38
Alice got off the elevator and headed for a door. She grabbed her keys and stopped. Dana was leaning against Alices door, waiting. Alice walked up and stood next to Dana.
Hi. Alice said.
Hi, I thought I stop by and see you, since you wanted to talk. Alice pulled her strap up her arm.
Well, I would really love to talk to you, but I have a date. Dana moved away from the door.
Oh, well-uh, when is it a good time to talk?
Ill call you ok. But I really gotta go. Dana ran her fingers through her hair. Alice unlocked her door and stood in the doorway.
Alright, well Ill talk to you later.
Yeah.
Good night. Have a great time.
Thanks, bye. Alice closed her door. Dana stood there in disbelief. She wiped the tears from her face and walked away.
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Marina stopped in front of a house and got out. She called Jenny and asked her for Melissas address. Jenny pleaded for her to come home, but this is what she had to do. Marina walked up the steps and knocked on the door. She didnt get any reply, so she twisted the *****. The door was unlocked, and she walked in. She looked around the house, looking for Melissa.
Where are you, you crazy *****!! Marina screamed through the house.
She looked in every room, but no sight of her. Marina headed for the kitchen and grabbed a knife. She walked into the living room and destroyed the couch and love seat. She knocked over the lamp, smashed the TV to the floor. She walked into Melissas room and destroyed everything. She smashed her mirror, threw everything out of the drawers and her closet. Marina fell to the floor, out of breath. She stood up and dropped the knife. She walked out of Melissas room and walked out of the house. She closed the door and ran to her car and drove off.
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Bette was sitting around, holding Kits hand. She looked up when she saw the doctor head towards Bette and Kit. Bette stood up, still holding onto her sisters hand. The doctor approached them and stood.
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this is great and I can’t wait to see what happens with everone please post soon
OMG that was great… and Bette dosent need the CAC..please post soon
its really sad to see shane hurt, but i think she did the right thing…
I loved Shane’s outburst towards Carmen. I know I might be in the minority but Shane did the same sh*t to Carmen. Yes I know Carmen was a bit more deceitful but Shane automatically starts screwing someone else when she’s hurt compared to Carmens indiscretions w/ Nikki. I want Sharmen back together but they should discuss why Shane cheated in the first place. Great job.
WOW! It’s a good thing that Melissa wasn’t home. Oh boy Marina’s rage is something else.Good job Marina! Shane, how dare you act this way, what about what you did to Carmen? I’m glad that Tina and Bette are OK. NICE JOB ONCE AGAIN.
That was freakin’ great! Thank you so much for the excellent Sharmen!Can’t wait to see if Carmen will manage to win her back!
I really wanna see how you’re trying to get Carmen and Shane back together without making it look too easy…
thats waht I´m talking about!! the shane carmen part was amazing!!!!!!!!
really, really good!