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Damaged Ch. 38
Shane, dont do this. It was a mistake, Im sorry. I never mean to hurt you. Will you please listen? Shane pushed Carmen away.
I dont want to hear anything you have to say.
But you dont understand Shane, I love you. I want to be with you. Shane stopped and looked at Carmen.
If you did love me, you wouldnt be ***** someone behind my back. Im out of here. Shane walked past Carmen, but Carmen grabbed a hold of Shanes arm.
Youre not going anywhere. Shane pushed Carmen off of her, and she fell to the ground.
Goodbye Carmen. Shane walked out of Milk with the blonde. Carmen let her head fall and started to cry. She looked around, and everyone was staring at her. She got the strength to get up and walked to her car.
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Melissa was walking to her house with a fling. She was laughing and smiling when she opened the door. She walks in and stood in the doorway. She looked around her house, and everything was destroyed. She balled her fists and started to walk around the house. She headed to her room and walked around. She felt tears fall down her face. She wiped them away and her face flushed.
That ***** *****. She doesnt know what shes getting herself into. Melissa walked out of her room and headed back to the living room.
What the ***** happened here? The woman said, sitting on her destroyed couch. Melissa walked up to her and pulled her off the couch. She threw her to the ground, and the girl looked up at her.
What the ***** is your problem?
Someone destroyed my ***** house! Im way beyond pissed, and you ask me whats my problem?! Melissa swung at her and hit her in the face. The girl gasped and grabbed her face.
You crazy *****! Ill show you a crazy *****! Melissa grabbed the girl by her arms and dragged her to her room.
NO! LET ME GO!! Melissa ignored her pleading and threw her in her room and closed the door.
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Alice and Jordana were sitting at Thai Fresh Restaurant. They order their food and handed their menus to the waiter. Alice looked around the restaurant, and Jordana rested her arms on the table.
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this is great and I can’t wait to see what happens with everone please post soon
OMG that was great… and Bette dosent need the CAC..please post soon
its really sad to see shane hurt, but i think she did the right thing…
I loved Shane’s outburst towards Carmen. I know I might be in the minority but Shane did the same sh*t to Carmen. Yes I know Carmen was a bit more deceitful but Shane automatically starts screwing someone else when she’s hurt compared to Carmens indiscretions w/ Nikki. I want Sharmen back together but they should discuss why Shane cheated in the first place. Great job.
WOW! It’s a good thing that Melissa wasn’t home. Oh boy Marina’s rage is something else.Good job Marina! Shane, how dare you act this way, what about what you did to Carmen? I’m glad that Tina and Bette are OK. NICE JOB ONCE AGAIN.
That was freakin’ great! Thank you so much for the excellent Sharmen!Can’t wait to see if Carmen will manage to win her back!
I really wanna see how you’re trying to get Carmen and Shane back together without making it look too easy…
thats waht I´m talking about!! the shane carmen part was amazing!!!!!!!!
really, really good!