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    Damaged Ch. 40

                Bette walked into Savings and Loan Bank. She walked up to a counter and waited for someone to come. She noticed a woman head her way and stopped.

     

    Hi, how may I help you today.

     

    Hi, Im Bette Porter. I was wondering if I could get a $50, 000 loan on a building downtown LA. She handed the lady the paper, and she looked it over.

     

    Well, Ms. Potter, you might be in luck. Ill be back in just a second. Bette looked around and tapped her foot. The lady came back and handed Bette the paper. Alright, Ill need you to fill this paper out and give this back to me before the end of this week.

     

    Thank you so much for this.

     

    Your welcome, enjoy the rest of the your day.

     

    You too. Bette headed out of the bank and walked to her car. Her phone rings, and she answered it. Hello?Hi GabrielleYeah, I just came from the bank.They gave me the loanSo Ill meet you downtownAlright, bye. She hung up her phone and headed down the street. She made it to downtown and found the building. She saw Gabrielle, standing outside of the building and pulled up to the curb. She got out and shook Gabrielles hand.

     

    Thank you for meeting here at such a short notice.

     

    No problem, this is my job. So would you like to check it out?

     

    Of course, lead the way. They walked into the building and looked around. Bette was in awe, high ceiling, big pillars, and enough space for the art. She found some steps and started to walk up. She made to the top and fell in love. This is great, I can my office up here and look from below. She said to herself. Gabrielle came up the steps and saw Bette twirling around the area.

     

    Im guessing you like this place. She crossed her arms and smiled.

     

    I love it, this is perfect for my work. I know a lot of young artists and famous artists that can bring their work here. I can do this on my own, and it will be a success. Gabrielle smiled at her college buddy.

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    Comments

    1. Yes, I find it hard to picture Marina as someone who tucks her tail and run;however, when we love someone as much as Marina loves Jenny then we’ll do almost anything it takes to make them happy,right? I too like this stronger Alice,she deserves to be happy too. Oh no Shane’s all alone, now what? LOVED THE CHAPTER(especially Melissa getting knocked OUT. Come back soon my good little Drama Queen…

    2. ackemat is right…i like that alice has moved on and found someone…like it when she’s happy…much as i hate to say it Shane is gonna have to do this on her own…only way she’ll get through it for good.

    3. Hmm I didn’t think Marina would run. I thought for sure she had some connections or knew someone that could handle their Melissa problem. Hope Marina and Jenny aren’t gone for good. Love this story.

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