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Damaged Ch. 43
Tina, wheres Bette? Marina asked.
Well, she had to stay and watched over the gallery. She decided to stay.
Alright, enough chatting. Lets get your guys stuff and get on home. Everybody grabbed their stuff and headed towards the terminals.
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Back in LA
Bette was turning off the lights at the gallery and grabbed her things. She was headed out the door and closed it. She locked the door and started to walk to her car Her phone rings, and she answered it. PorterHey TeeYou guys just make it?Im just leaving the galleryShes with KitWell you enjoy yourselfAlright, I love you too.. Bye She unlocked her doors and started to get in.
Hello Bette. Bette turned around and saw Helena.
What do you want Helena? Helena walked up to Bettes car.
WellI know this might sound weird, but would you like to have dinner with me? Bette looked at her disgustedly.
Is this a sick joke?
No, Im being serious. I would like to talk to you about some things if you dont mind. Bette stood on the back of her heel and took a deep breath. Im going to regret this. Bette thought.
Alright, fine. Where?
Chis. Its on Johnson and 7th. So Ill meet you there at 7:00.
At 7:00.
Ciao. Helena walked off and headed to her car. Bette shook her head and got into her car.
What am I getting myself into? Bette pulled out of the parking lot and headed home.
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The girls pulled up to Marina and Jennys beach house and were in awe. They got out and grabbed their things. Marina got out of the van and walked up to the house. She unlocked the door and helped them with their things. They all walked up the steps and into the house.
Holy *****. Shane said. Everybody walked around the house and couldnt believe how big it was.
Nice digs. How much did this cost? Carmen asked.
Not much really. I couldnt believe it, Jenny wanted it. So I bought it.
Shes got you spoiled. Tina looked back at Jenny and smiled.
Alright girls, go and pick your rooms. Kill each other for the best one. Jenny yelled while the girls ran around the house looking the best room. Everybody ran and got their room, while Shane was still looking. She walked into a bedroom, and Carmen was unpacking her things. Shane started to head out of the room, but Carmen stopped her.
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(74 votes, average: 3.41 out of 5)
man, i hope u do one when they get home, the akwardness between shand and carmen would be grand
damn, i really like dana, but she’s really pissing me off, i think lara should get a new girl, and alice should stay with jordana… but other than that gr8 story!! ;)
Yeah two chapters in one day, thank you!!
Gosh, you always stop in moments like that, do you want to torture me????
:-)
That was perfect, I like the acting from Shane and Carmen and of course from jenny, that seh saw whats going on with shane. I can´t wait for the next chapter.
Someone needs to call on her behavior she just keeps f***ing up and hurting carmen
Great chapter. It’s nice to Shane and Carmen talking again. How about that a bet between Bette and Helena,I can’t wait to see who wins. Let me guess, is this the calm before the storm? Drama that what I live for. Another great job.
That damn Shane, Carmen should choke her. Glad they ended up in the same room. There goes Dana trying to screw up Alice & Jordana. Bette should never have told Helena where Tina is. Great start to Key West.
It floors me that these chapters have a four star rating…they really are five stars all the way! Thanks!