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Damaged Ch. 43
Shane, you dont have to leave. I promise you I wont say a word to you. Shane looked out at Carmen and closed the door. She walked over to the extra bed and sat her things down. She opened the drawer on the dresser and start putting her clothes away. As soon as she was finished she walked out of the door. She headed towards the kitchen and found everyone laughing and talking. Carmen walked in right after her.
So what are we doing tonight ladies? Alice asked.
Well I thought we go out to eat first and then go dancing. I found this place called Aqua, its a ***** nightclub. So if you guys want to go Jenny said looking at everybody.
Im in. Shane said.
Were in. Alice said.
I think Ill stay here. Tina said.
Come on Tee, live a little. Please? Carmen asked.
Oh alright. Ill go.
So were all going? Marina asked. Everybody nodded their head and said yes.
Alright, lets head out. They walked out of the house and down the street. They took in the sights and talked. Shane stood behind the crowd and her eyes wandered around the island. Alice stopped in front of a restaurant and looked.
Hey you guys, lets go here. She pointed at Square One. Everybody tag a long behind Alice and Jordana and walked in the restaurant. They all together, and Shane stood away from Carmen. She kept quiet and looked around. A raven haired waitress walked up to the group and smiled.
Hi, how many?
Umm9. Tina said.
Alright follow me. The group followed the waitress to a round table. They all took their seat and grabbed their menus.
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Bette pulled her car up in front of Chis and got out. The valet guy walked around and drove off. The guy gave her a ticket, and she walked in. Bette stood and looked around for Helena. She couldnt believe she was actually doing this. She kept looking around until she heard that familiar voice.
Bette. She looked to the left and saw Helena wave her arm. Bette took a deep breath and started to walk over to the table. She made a way through and grabbed the chair. Thanks for coming. Bette pulled her chair out and took a seat.
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(74 votes, average: 3.41 out of 5)
man, i hope u do one when they get home, the akwardness between shand and carmen would be grand
damn, i really like dana, but she’s really pissing me off, i think lara should get a new girl, and alice should stay with jordana… but other than that gr8 story!! ;)
Yeah two chapters in one day, thank you!!
Gosh, you always stop in moments like that, do you want to torture me????
:-)
That was perfect, I like the acting from Shane and Carmen and of course from jenny, that seh saw whats going on with shane. I can´t wait for the next chapter.
Someone needs to call on her behavior she just keeps f***ing up and hurting carmen
Great chapter. It’s nice to Shane and Carmen talking again. How about that a bet between Bette and Helena,I can’t wait to see who wins. Let me guess, is this the calm before the storm? Drama that what I live for. Another great job.
That damn Shane, Carmen should choke her. Glad they ended up in the same room. There goes Dana trying to screw up Alice & Jordana. Bette should never have told Helena where Tina is. Great start to Key West.
It floors me that these chapters have a four star rating…they really are five stars all the way! Thanks!