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Damaged Ch. 62
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Jenny dropped her bags and jumped into Shane’s arms. Shane twirled Jenny around and put her down.
“It’s good to see you.”
“I know it’s good to be back home. How you doing Carmen?”
“I’m doing good, you look really good.”
“Thank you.”
“Where’s Marina?”
“She went back to her place to get settle. I wanted to stay here for awhile.”
“It’s good to have you back home.” Shane rubbed Jenny’s head and smiled.
“So, who’s this mystery girl you’ve been telling me about?”
“Christina? She’s out in the back, fighting with Mark. They’re having their ‘first fight.’”
“Those two are dating?”
“Yeah, for a few weeks.”
“Wow, I missed a lot since I’ve been gone.”
“And another thing, Jordana purpose to Alice.”
“WowI missed out on everything.” Shane wrapped her arm around Jenny.
“You’re back home, you won’t miss a thing.” Their conversation was broken when they heard the back door slam. They all looked up and saw Christina storming through the house. She didn’t even pay the girls any attention. She walked into her room and slammed the door.
“What was that about?” Jenny looked at Shane.
“I don’t know. I’m about to find out.” Shane walked away and walked to Christina’s bedroom. She walked up to the door and knocked on it.
“Chris, are you okay?”
“Yeah, I’m fine.”
“Do you want me to come in?”
“No, I’m fine. I just want to be alone.” Shane walked away from the door and walked back into the living room. Christina listened to Shane walk away from the door. She pulled out a razor and started to cut at her flesh. She grabbed her towel and laid it on the wound. She looked up to the ceiling with tears in her eyes.
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Bette was sitting at her desk, working on the new project for the gallery. Her phone rings and picked it up.
“Hello?Hi TWhat’s wrong?Calm down, breatheWhat’s wrong?What?What do you mean?” Bette’s blood started to boil. She clenched her hand into a fist. “Babe, I’ll be home as soon as I canJust hang on, I’m on my wayI love you tooBye.” Bette hung up the phone and started to grab her things. James ran up the steps and walked over to her desk.
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okay, I’ll comment, put your guns down ;)
Ah, poor, poor Christina, having a fight and cutting her arms, ooooooooh, little misunderstood girl nobody loves. Bah ;)
Mh, basically I don’t understood all these “Dana sucks”-comments. I don’t know why, but I don’t think she’s cheating on Lara. I mean, I’m a big one screaming if someone even thinks about cheating on their partners, but in this case… maybe Lara doesn’t strike me as Dana’s girlfriend. She (Dana )seems to be more grown up, too grown up… the path you striked with Dana is totally okay with me. No need for her to stay with Lara if she isn’t her true love.
Ahm, anything else ? Do I sense some carmen-shane interruption (jenny -.-), or am I paranoid ? If yes, aaaah, don’t :( Let her stay with Marina and give us some of that… and let shane stay with carmen. It’s exactly what shee needs, what both of them probably need (and what we need ;P Plus we need a great shane-carmen-love-scene ^^). A happy period togehter…without the drama that comes along with jenny psycho.
I like your story very much, please continue :)
You ask for good or bad. The good is Tina is alright The bad is someone needs to show Helene that everything can’t go her way. Someone needs to put the fear of the Almighty into her. Helene is evil in this. does she want Bette, Tina or the baby? thanks
I have been reading this since the beginning and I think you are doing an excellent job, just a few quick questions…is Helena trying to steal Tina back from Bette or does she just want the baby? what is wrong with Dana? why is she always hurting the women that she is involved with? but really you are great and I can’t wait for the next chapter.
you’ve asked for feedback and since i read your story regularly i owe you that- but honestly i’m not sure what to say– your story is interesting cause i never know what you’ll come up with next- but it’s hard to offer suggestions because your characters have the same names as the women on the show- but their personalities are not too close- highly entertaining- but not much like the characters from the show. for instance, I don’t think of your Dana as the Dana i love from the L Word. Your story is a great soap opera. anyway- thanks for writing.
i love your story. especially the dana and lara part where tehy are obth cheating with the same girl. loe B&T keep up the good work
Nice job, I’m especially glad that Jenny and Marina are back. Now the big question is will that damn Melissa return to start up her “BullShit” with Jenny and Marina again. Come on Bette will definitely have to do something drastic to that “Bitch from Hell” soon because they can’t keep living like this. Once again I love your story,you really do your characters justice. Please come back soon with another chapter…
Helenas is beyond crazy..B&T have to protect themselves and their baby cuz against crazy people you never know..great chappy post soon
the part with christina is going to be interesting!