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Damaged Ch. 62
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“Bette, I have-where are you going?”
“I have to get home James. Something happened with Tina, and she needs me. So if you can shut the gallery down for me. I would really appreciate that.”
“No problem Bette.”
“Thank you.” Bette started to walk down the steps and walked out the door. She started to walk over to her car to get it. She stopped when she noticed her front wheel was flat.
“*****!” She kicked the tire and looked around. She went back inside the gallery to have James take her home. Over across the street, Helena smiled devilishly and drove off in her convertible.
*****
Lara was on her break, drinking her green tea. She saw Eva walk into the restaurant and looked away. Eva saw the beautiful redhead and walked over to her table.
“Is this seat taken?” Lara looked up from her newspaper.
“No, go ahead.” Eva sat her purse on the floor and sat down.
“So how are you today?”
“I’m just fine, thank you.” Eva reached over the table and grabbed Lara’s hand.
“Please don’t blow me off because of the other night. I’m sorry ok, I’ve never meant to come on that strong.” Lara looked at Eva and melted. She grabbed Eva’s hand and intertwined it with hers.
“I forgive you.” Eva smiled and kissed Lara’s hand.
“How long is your break?”
“I have fifteen minutes left.” Eva gets out of her seat and pulls Lara’s hand.
“Come on.” Lara followed behind Eva.
“Where are we going?” Eva went to the ladies room and locked the door. She pushed up against Lara on the counter and kissed her roughly. Lara didn’t push her away and kissed her back. Eva ran her hand up Lara’s skirt and pulled at her panties. She shoved her hand in and played with her *****. Lara gasped and arched her back. She held onto Eva’s shoulders for support. Eva sucked on Lara’s neck while she fingered her roughly.
“OoohhI’m almost there” Eva smiled when she knew it didn’t take this redhead long away to come. Eva pinched her bud and bit down on her neck. Lara’s body jerks from under Eva. Her mouth open, but nothing came out. She fell back against the mirror and let go of Eva’s shoulders. Eva pulled away from Lara and smiled. Lara backed away from the counter and kissed Eva roughly.
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okay, I’ll comment, put your guns down ;)
Ah, poor, poor Christina, having a fight and cutting her arms, ooooooooh, little misunderstood girl nobody loves. Bah ;)
Mh, basically I don’t understood all these “Dana sucks”-comments. I don’t know why, but I don’t think she’s cheating on Lara. I mean, I’m a big one screaming if someone even thinks about cheating on their partners, but in this case… maybe Lara doesn’t strike me as Dana’s girlfriend. She (Dana )seems to be more grown up, too grown up… the path you striked with Dana is totally okay with me. No need for her to stay with Lara if she isn’t her true love.
Ahm, anything else ? Do I sense some carmen-shane interruption (jenny -.-), or am I paranoid ? If yes, aaaah, don’t :( Let her stay with Marina and give us some of that… and let shane stay with carmen. It’s exactly what shee needs, what both of them probably need (and what we need ;P Plus we need a great shane-carmen-love-scene ^^). A happy period togehter…without the drama that comes along with jenny psycho.
I like your story very much, please continue :)
You ask for good or bad. The good is Tina is alright The bad is someone needs to show Helene that everything can’t go her way. Someone needs to put the fear of the Almighty into her. Helene is evil in this. does she want Bette, Tina or the baby? thanks
I have been reading this since the beginning and I think you are doing an excellent job, just a few quick questions…is Helena trying to steal Tina back from Bette or does she just want the baby? what is wrong with Dana? why is she always hurting the women that she is involved with? but really you are great and I can’t wait for the next chapter.
you’ve asked for feedback and since i read your story regularly i owe you that- but honestly i’m not sure what to say– your story is interesting cause i never know what you’ll come up with next- but it’s hard to offer suggestions because your characters have the same names as the women on the show- but their personalities are not too close- highly entertaining- but not much like the characters from the show. for instance, I don’t think of your Dana as the Dana i love from the L Word. Your story is a great soap opera. anyway- thanks for writing.
i love your story. especially the dana and lara part where tehy are obth cheating with the same girl. loe B&T keep up the good work
Nice job, I’m especially glad that Jenny and Marina are back. Now the big question is will that damn Melissa return to start up her “BullShit” with Jenny and Marina again. Come on Bette will definitely have to do something drastic to that “Bitch from Hell” soon because they can’t keep living like this. Once again I love your story,you really do your characters justice. Please come back soon with another chapter…
Helenas is beyond crazy..B&T have to protect themselves and their baby cuz against crazy people you never know..great chappy post soon
the part with christina is going to be interesting!