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Dana’s Choice Chapter 11 (Final chapter)
Dana smiled back at Shane. “You’re right, wish me luck.” Shane patted Dana on the knee as she stood to leave. “I don’t think you’ll need it, but good luck.”
DANA’S CONDOMINIUM LATER THAT NIGHT
When Dana opened the door she was met by a very anxious Alice. “Where have you been, I thought something happen to you, you know there’s a lot of craziness out there concerning you?” Dana took Alice’s face in her hands. “Al, I’ve been a celebrity for a while now, and I can’t live my life in fear of a few out of touch fans, and neither can you. I’m sorry if I caused you any worry, but you’ll understand in a little while what I’ve been doing all day.”
She pulled Alice over to the sofa so she would be sitting when Dana spoke to her. “Al, as Howie pointed out sometimes I speak before I think things through, and if I could I would take back what I said today in the interview.” Dana then looked at Alice and could see the confusion in her face. “Wait, that not what I meant, what I mean is I wanted it to be special when I asked you to spend your life with me. Not me blurting it out in front of a studio audience.”
Dana reached into her jeans pockets and pulled out a small black velvet box. When she opened it and showed it to Alice it contained two commitment rings. “Alice will you spend the rest of your life with me?”
Dana then pulled out one of the rings so Alice could read the inscription inside of the ring. It simply said “Dana’s choice” then she showed Alice her ring which said, “Alice’s choice.” She looked at Alice with a questioning look on her face. “I hope that’s true, that you will choose me to spend you life with.”
Alice picked up Dana’s ring and placed it on Dana’s finger, then Dana picked up Alice ring and did the same.
While tears were falling from both of their eyes, Alice told Dana. “You are and will always be my choice.” They then kissed knowing from that day on there would never be any questions about their commitment to each other.
The End.
OK guys was that sappy enough for you.
My next story is going to be a lot more serious and dealing with a subject matter that nobody like to address and that is ***** hatred. It will be darker in it contents, but it will be a Danish piece none the less. I’ve already written the first chapter, and I wasn’t going to post it until I finished it, but I’ve changed my mind. If the feedback is negative I will drop the story, but I do think this is a real issue that faces the ***** community.
Hope you guys enjoyed this story, because I really did enjoy writing it. Thanks again to Jacq for the suggestion of this story, as always I always count on your feedback. Deb
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(11 votes, average: 4.27 out of 5)
awww that was such a cute ending, you have regained my faith in love debs!
great ending! really enjoyed this story, thanks for taking the time to write it. And i’m very much looking forward to your next story too, very interesting idea you got there.
Thanks for this :D :D . You know we need hope, but we need realistic topics also, so I’m waiting you next story.
I loved your story!! It was fantastic and please write more about Alice and Dana because after all somebody has to keep there love alive. I loved the story so much and I cannot wait to read your next one. Thank you so much for writing.
I had loved all the way this story! It was really fantastic. Can I just say that I love so much the rings, Dana’s choice and Alice’s choice::: PERFECT!
I have read every single one of your chapters and loved them all. This was a fantastic end, i loved it. I also can’t wait for your new story!
Thanks for sharing your story with us,looking forward to the next one.
Well worth the wait! I loved the fact that you let them “go public as a couple.” Also, the inscriptions on the rings? *squeal* So sweet! I think I might “copy” it for my wedding bands. Good work, Deb!
The rings with the inscription was a really nice touch Deb. Thank you for this fic, I love it.
Excellent story! Thanks enjoyed reading it.Love Dana and Alice they should be together 4ever!!!!!
just read the whole thing!.. just couldnt stop reading! such a great story and thanx for the happy danish.. have to agree with everyone on the ring inscriptions.. that was so sweet!! :’D .. ahh happy tears!!
i love those rings!!! thats very sweet. awaiting for your next post.