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Dance With Us 16
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Carmen (shaking her head): No because Kai cheats.
Angie (setting a card on the table): Dead fishie…
Shane (looking): No honey that is called busted. She has a full house…
Peggy (laughing): We were playing rummy. I was not informed of poker.
Helena (wincing): Um, no, no poker.
Papi (remembering): Shit yeah oops…
Angie (looking up): Bad word…
Kai (turning her phone off): One I do not cheat, two you have a full house pumpkin and three definitely not poker.
Shane (confused): Were we playing poker….
Carmen (taking her cards from her): Get that thought of your head.
Lisa (leaning back): Here comes Tina…
Bette (standing up): Hey!
Tina (taking Bette’s hand): This is my Aunt Michaela and her wife Danyael, you know most of the crew here, that’s Papi, Tasha, Kai, Lisa and Peggy.
Pleasantries were exchanged and everyone moved over so they could sit.
Alice (taking Angie from Kai): How did you find Tina?
Dylan (teasing): Surprisingly it wasn’t you…
Alice (proudly): I’m better than the internet….
Shane (pointing): You are the internet.
Tina (remembering the quickest way to get information): No. Why are there shot glasses on the table?
Kit groaned, Peggy shrugged and Bette growled.
Helena (pointing): A toast. We are suppose to light them on fire, some New Zealand tradition or other.
Peggy (shaking her head): Wrong tribe darling.
Alice (piping up): New oh yeah Lucy Lawless the bad ass with the round killing thing.
Tasha (pointing out): Chakram…
Alice (patting her arm): Bless you.
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wow…its been too long and hopefully the next update will come asap..i love this story..i imagine it must take a lot work to come up with all the banter between all the characters..i was wondering how long it would take before one of the gang found out…wonder how Alice will handle it and once she finds out the truth?? Please update again soon.
Oh so happy you are back with this. I have been checking all the time and when I saw that you posted!!!!!! So excited, love it, please keep going.
woo woo Great to have you back at last lol. I am going to enjoy this slowly pmsl.
For a comeback, this was one. I love family time like this. Life is too short to be fighting and unhappy all way through, Life is so short that any opportunity to be togetherand happyas a family is great.Yet I didn’t want somebody to know what was happening between Bette, Tina and Helena just yet. Not this way anyway. Now, I hope Alice would decide to talk to Tina first before making any fast conclusion. It great to have you back mate. PPVS
Hello TB417, Wow wee what a great chappie.The showdown with Tina aunt and partner was tense and sweetly balanced by the hilarity of Bette and the gang. The methods suggested to try Bette down were so humorous.Good to have Dylan and Helena maknig headway and with Peggy’s approval. They do have far to go and are now on the right track.Angie was adorable as she stole the show and added much needed calmness to Tina’s meeting.The house party was a blast as the whole gang took part. So much laughter and enjoyment as well as splashing and soaking.Then Tina offering Helena some comfort at Dylan’s departure is caught by Alice. Dropped mouth as Alice tries to digest this sight and think about the hurricane to follow.TB417 you have rewritten the rules here and I can’t wait to read more.Please post soon.Many thanks from Your stunned and Loyal Fan.
Oh shit now Alice know!