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Dance With Us 16
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Kit (wincing): No. No flames, no sharp pointie objects and (grabbing Helena’s lighter.) someone help me (pleading.)
Papi (evilly): Come on babe, just a little fire (pouting) please. (Lip trembling) I only want a little one that’s all…
Kit (shaking her head): No. No and no.
Papi (looking around): Meanie (sticking her tongue out) but we can still do the shots, right?
Helena (nodding): Of course. Get everyone drunk and play truth or dare.
Kit (groaning): When she beats your bum, do not come crying to me.
Helena (shrugging): Kit, please relax. We have everything under control (giggling as Papi held up a box of matches.) See.
Papi (setting the shots on the tray): Yep completely under control (lighting a match.)
Kit (putting her head down): Not here. Please….
Helena (patting her on the back): Relax….
Kit (motioning): Why me (wondering vaguely if there was a remote island she could hide on.)
Corner Table
Kai (helping Angie with her cards): She’s looking through paperwork.
Alice (watching): Chairs are closer, bunched up…
Tasha (counting): Can she get up?
Shane (handing Carmen a strawberry): Little tight but yeah…
Peggy (distracting Bette): Now you said you have some O Keefe’s possibly?
Bette (tearing another napkin to shreds): And Huntington’s….
Helena (sitting next to her): Depending on the stage and piece second room, the one with the two windows on one side.
Papi (handing out shots): Bette, Kit asked me to tell you nicely to stop tearing up napkins…
Peggy (looking up as Bette growled): Bette…
Angie (watching her mom): Momma mad…
Alice (starting): Your momma is…
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wow…its been too long and hopefully the next update will come asap..i love this story..i imagine it must take a lot work to come up with all the banter between all the characters..i was wondering how long it would take before one of the gang found out…wonder how Alice will handle it and once she finds out the truth?? Please update again soon.
Oh so happy you are back with this. I have been checking all the time and when I saw that you posted!!!!!! So excited, love it, please keep going.
woo woo Great to have you back at last lol. I am going to enjoy this slowly pmsl.
For a comeback, this was one. I love family time like this. Life is too short to be fighting and unhappy all way through, Life is so short that any opportunity to be togetherand happyas a family is great.Yet I didn’t want somebody to know what was happening between Bette, Tina and Helena just yet. Not this way anyway. Now, I hope Alice would decide to talk to Tina first before making any fast conclusion. It great to have you back mate. PPVS
Hello TB417, Wow wee what a great chappie.The showdown with Tina aunt and partner was tense and sweetly balanced by the hilarity of Bette and the gang. The methods suggested to try Bette down were so humorous.Good to have Dylan and Helena maknig headway and with Peggy’s approval. They do have far to go and are now on the right track.Angie was adorable as she stole the show and added much needed calmness to Tina’s meeting.The house party was a blast as the whole gang took part. So much laughter and enjoyment as well as splashing and soaking.Then Tina offering Helena some comfort at Dylan’s departure is caught by Alice. Dropped mouth as Alice tries to digest this sight and think about the hurricane to follow.TB417 you have rewritten the rules here and I can’t wait to read more.Please post soon.Many thanks from Your stunned and Loyal Fan.
Oh shit now Alice know!