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Dance With Us 16
Alice (wrapping her arm around her waist): Go on relax and enjoy (opening the patio doors.) Baby did you figure it out yet.
Tasha (looking up): Yes but um we don’t know where to put it.
Kai (picking up the wrapping paper it came in): Wait until Bette gets here. She’s good at that.
Lisa (dragging a cooler out): Yes very good at that. Did anyone talk to them this morning?
Helena (helping her with the cooler): I spoke with Tina and the only thing she said is that her aunts have headed back to North Carolina and will be back this way when they return from London.
Dylan (helping Tasha with the bolts): How did she sound?
Helena (shrugging): When I talked with her, she seemed fine?
Alice (smirking): Bette’s probably ready to strangle someone.
Dylan (teasing): And you weren’t a couple of days ago (dodging the elbow to the ribs.)
Peggy (leaning on her walker): There you are. I couldn’t get the front door open, seems stuck or something…
Alice (opening the gate): Sorry, come here let me help you with that.
Peggy (taking in the scene): Good afternoon (smiling as Helena kissed her cheek, Tasha, Lisa, Kai and Dylan hugged her then went back to their work.) It looks perfectly gorgeous.
Alice (carrying the bags): It does. Come on, I’ve got something you’ll really like.
Tasha (setting the lid on the fire bowl): Yeah, I’ve got to sand it down or something (referring to the door.)
Lisa (looking around): Okay we have to get the rail for the steps then I’ll help you with the door.
Kai (teasing): Tasha, please don’t give her power tools…
Tasha (playing along): Why? She dangerous or something…
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(46 votes, average: 3.46 out of 5)
wow…its been too long and hopefully the next update will come asap..i love this story..i imagine it must take a lot work to come up with all the banter between all the characters..i was wondering how long it would take before one of the gang found out…wonder how Alice will handle it and once she finds out the truth?? Please update again soon.
Oh so happy you are back with this. I have been checking all the time and when I saw that you posted!!!!!! So excited, love it, please keep going.
woo woo Great to have you back at last lol. I am going to enjoy this slowly pmsl.
For a comeback, this was one. I love family time like this. Life is too short to be fighting and unhappy all way through, Life is so short that any opportunity to be togetherand happyas a family is great.Yet I didn’t want somebody to know what was happening between Bette, Tina and Helena just yet. Not this way anyway. Now, I hope Alice would decide to talk to Tina first before making any fast conclusion. It great to have you back mate. PPVS
Hello TB417, Wow wee what a great chappie.The showdown with Tina aunt and partner was tense and sweetly balanced by the hilarity of Bette and the gang. The methods suggested to try Bette down were so humorous.Good to have Dylan and Helena maknig headway and with Peggy’s approval. They do have far to go and are now on the right track.Angie was adorable as she stole the show and added much needed calmness to Tina’s meeting.The house party was a blast as the whole gang took part. So much laughter and enjoyment as well as splashing and soaking.Then Tina offering Helena some comfort at Dylan’s departure is caught by Alice. Dropped mouth as Alice tries to digest this sight and think about the hurricane to follow.TB417 you have rewritten the rules here and I can’t wait to read more.Please post soon.Many thanks from Your stunned and Loyal Fan.
Oh shit now Alice know!