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Dance With Us 16
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Helena (wrapping her arms around Dylan): Sounds like something you would do.
Dylan (laughing): What are you implying Ms. Peabody?
Helena (shoving her playfully): You with power tools would be extremely dangerous (darting out of the way.)
Tasha (watching them): She does have a point? Kai, so no power tools?
Lisa (grumbling): Finish that and you’re toast….
Kai (sticking her tongue out): It’s a hazard, major hazard for you to have any power (ducking and taking off.)
Living Room
Peggy (sitting reading the paper): Dylan and I will leave from here and fly into New York.
Alice (setting the cup of tea down): What time?
Peggy (smiling): Around eight or so. Just call ahead and off we go. No lines, no fuss and no muss.
Kit (knocking and opening the door): Hey!
Papi (setting a box down): Morning, be right back.
Alice (hugging her): So when’s the big day…
Peggy (grabbing the walker): The scoundrel is romantic.
Kit (trying not to blush): We’re not sure yet. (Fondly) she is so dam sweet…
Tina (coming in): Angie already bee lined around the back, chasing Helena and Dylan. You guys did a hell of a job (hugging Alice and Kit, kissing Peggy on the cheek.)
Bette (walking in behind her): Afternoon (setting her bags down and hugging everyone.)
Papi (coming in with another box): That’s everything. (Exchanging pleasantries) looks nice.
Alice (looking around): It’s coming along, we’re coming along and we’re almost settled in.
Lisa (walking in): Hey! Bette we need your expertise…
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wow…its been too long and hopefully the next update will come asap..i love this story..i imagine it must take a lot work to come up with all the banter between all the characters..i was wondering how long it would take before one of the gang found out…wonder how Alice will handle it and once she finds out the truth?? Please update again soon.
Oh so happy you are back with this. I have been checking all the time and when I saw that you posted!!!!!! So excited, love it, please keep going.
woo woo Great to have you back at last lol. I am going to enjoy this slowly pmsl.
For a comeback, this was one. I love family time like this. Life is too short to be fighting and unhappy all way through, Life is so short that any opportunity to be togetherand happyas a family is great.Yet I didn’t want somebody to know what was happening between Bette, Tina and Helena just yet. Not this way anyway. Now, I hope Alice would decide to talk to Tina first before making any fast conclusion. It great to have you back mate. PPVS
Hello TB417, Wow wee what a great chappie.The showdown with Tina aunt and partner was tense and sweetly balanced by the hilarity of Bette and the gang. The methods suggested to try Bette down were so humorous.Good to have Dylan and Helena maknig headway and with Peggy’s approval. They do have far to go and are now on the right track.Angie was adorable as she stole the show and added much needed calmness to Tina’s meeting.The house party was a blast as the whole gang took part. So much laughter and enjoyment as well as splashing and soaking.Then Tina offering Helena some comfort at Dylan’s departure is caught by Alice. Dropped mouth as Alice tries to digest this sight and think about the hurricane to follow.TB417 you have rewritten the rules here and I can’t wait to read more.Please post soon.Many thanks from Your stunned and Loyal Fan.
Oh shit now Alice know!