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    Dance With Us 16

    Story written on November 22, 2009 by tibette417.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=74574
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    Uh Oh

    Bette and Papi stopped their play fight and looked at each other. Tasha shook her head and Kit laughed.

    Peggy (strolling in): Children (looking around the room) are you going to play or put dinner on?  

    Angie (climbing on her mother): Me play…

    Tina (taking the plastic silver ware out): Bette you have five minutes to get off that floor and clean up Boo, or you’re sleeping on the couch, you troublemaker (winking.) 

    Kit (laughing): Guess she told you…

    Bette (picking her daughter up and swinging her in the air): She didn’t say I would be sleeping alone (smirking.)

    Papi (shrugging): She got you there ouch (dodging the dish towel.) What was that for?

    Kit (threatening Papi): That is for you to get your bum in gear.

    Helena (coming back in for the trays): Um I’d like to remind you that this is the kitchen and not…

    Tasha (stuffing a piece of pepper in her mouth): Play nice….

    Bette (smirking): I’ll always play nice…

    Tina (yelling from outside): Bette….

    Helena (laughing): I better let her know, Bette is following her orders, for once (mischievously.)

    Bette (yelling): I heard that…

    Helena (laughing; grabbing a tray): Can’t touch me I have food in my possession…

    Tasha (shaking her head): About the only thing…

    Alice (shutting the grill lid): It’s about time. Do you know how hot this thing is and what about food in your hands?

    Tasha (setting a tray down; kissing her softly): I can make it hotter.

    Alice (smiling): I know you can.

    Peggy (pouring drinks for everyone): Now don’t burn the food.

    Tasha (taking the utensils): Good idea (shutting the cover; smiling as Alice hugged her from behind.)

    Bette (carrying Angie out): See all set. So no couch (snagging a carrot for Angie.)

    Angie (nibbling on her carrot): Momma good.

    Dylan (nearly dropping the dishes): Wait until you’re older…

    Tina (laughing): Yes when she’s graduating from college.

    Kit (agreeing): Yes after she graduates from college, you can let her out of her room.

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    1. wow…its been too long and hopefully the next update will come asap..i love this story..i imagine it must take a lot work to come up with all the banter between all the characters..i was wondering how long it would take before one of the gang found out…wonder how Alice will handle it and once she finds out the truth?? Please update again soon.

    4. For a comeback, this was one. I love family time like this. Life is too short to be fighting and unhappy all way through, Life is so short that any opportunity to be togetherand happyas a family is great.Yet I didn’t want somebody to know what was happening between Bette, Tina and Helena just yet. Not this way anyway. Now, I hope Alice would decide to talk to Tina first before making any fast conclusion. It great to have you back mate. PPVS

    5. Hello TB417, Wow wee what a great chappie.The showdown with Tina aunt and partner was tense and sweetly balanced by the hilarity of Bette and the gang. The methods suggested to try Bette down were so humorous.Good to have Dylan and Helena maknig headway and with Peggy’s approval. They do have far to go and are now on the right track.Angie was adorable as she stole the show and added much needed calmness to Tina’s meeting.The house party was a blast as the whole gang took part. So much laughter and enjoyment as well as splashing and soaking.Then Tina offering Helena some comfort at Dylan’s departure is caught by Alice. Dropped mouth as Alice tries to digest this sight and think about the hurricane to follow.TB417 you have rewritten the rules here and I can’t wait to read more.Please post soon.Many thanks from Your stunned and Loyal Fan.

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