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    Dance With Us 16

    Story written on November 22, 2009 by tibette417.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=74574
    Author Notes:

    Uh Oh

    Tasha (shaking her head): I’m going to get started on the food (listening to Alice screaming and more splashing.)

    Bette (kissing Tina softly): I’ll be right in.

    Kit (teasing): Oh no, the last time you helped…..

    Bette (glaring): I can so cook…

    Papi (shaking her hand): Well barbecue yes, cooking uh…

    Carmen (laughing): She does make mean french toast…

    Tina (backing up): It’s a breakfast food…

    Dylan (laughing): If you use wheat bread does that count (dodging the jab to her ribs?)

    Shane (setting her beer down): She does have a point.

    Helena (rolling her eyes): Right and who eats cupcakes for breakfast?

    Carmen (shaking her head): Not any more she doesn’t.

    Peggy (laughing at their antics): A proper English breakfast.

    Helena (grimacing): Mother…

    Bette (knowing what an English breakfast entailed): A little too heavy for me.

    Dylan (watching as Bette started towards Tina): Well um…

    Carmen (leaning into Shane): I wouldn’t finish that if I were you.

    Helena (walking outside): Get her Bette (laughing as Angie joined in..)

    Kitchen 

    Tasha (pulling various dishes out of the fridge when Papi and Carmen came in): Hey, thanks.

    Carmen (putting serving utensils on a tray): You’re welcome.

    Alice (running in with): Dam hide me…

    Tasha (rolling her eyes): Why?

    Alice (pouting): Bette shoved me in the pool…

    Papi (munching on a carrot): Bette should have played football or hockey. She runs into you and bam…

    Bette (teasing): I’ll give you bam, Tropicana Carmelita…

    Carmen (getting out of the way): Uh oh….

    Tasha (laughing at Bette and Papi’s antics): Take it outside…

    Kit (running in with Shane behind her): I’ll save you (sliding bumping into Bette and nearly falling) Ouch…

    Bette (laughing as Papi playfully tackled her): Hey! Whose side are you on?

    Kit (popping a dish towel across her sister’s ass): The winning side…

    Tina (carrying Angie in): Hey that’s my ass (realizing how that sounded.) Um…

    Helena (shaking her head): You know you two are going to be related through marriage (evilly.)

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    1. wow…its been too long and hopefully the next update will come asap..i love this story..i imagine it must take a lot work to come up with all the banter between all the characters..i was wondering how long it would take before one of the gang found out…wonder how Alice will handle it and once she finds out the truth?? Please update again soon.

    4. For a comeback, this was one. I love family time like this. Life is too short to be fighting and unhappy all way through, Life is so short that any opportunity to be togetherand happyas a family is great.Yet I didn’t want somebody to know what was happening between Bette, Tina and Helena just yet. Not this way anyway. Now, I hope Alice would decide to talk to Tina first before making any fast conclusion. It great to have you back mate. PPVS

    5. Hello TB417, Wow wee what a great chappie.The showdown with Tina aunt and partner was tense and sweetly balanced by the hilarity of Bette and the gang. The methods suggested to try Bette down were so humorous.Good to have Dylan and Helena maknig headway and with Peggy’s approval. They do have far to go and are now on the right track.Angie was adorable as she stole the show and added much needed calmness to Tina’s meeting.The house party was a blast as the whole gang took part. So much laughter and enjoyment as well as splashing and soaking.Then Tina offering Helena some comfort at Dylan’s departure is caught by Alice. Dropped mouth as Alice tries to digest this sight and think about the hurricane to follow.TB417 you have rewritten the rules here and I can’t wait to read more.Please post soon.Many thanks from Your stunned and Loyal Fan.

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