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    Dance With Us 3

    Story written on February 27, 2009 by tibette417.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=72737
    Author Notes:

    Coming Home

    The Planet 
    Bette (sitting on the couch across from Kit’s desk admiring the new sliding shelves): Now to find you a manager.
    Kit (sliding a bookcase sideways): Sure, and where am I going to find someone that will work and get payed according to LA. (Pausing) besides when everyone’s here they automatically jump into help. (Smiling) I never knew you could be such a good waitress (teasing…
    Bette (sipping her tea): Funny, real funny, Kit. Seriously I’d like you to try and take it a little easier. Enjoy yourself, take some time for you and Papi. 
    Kit (sitting on the edge of the desk): Like you and Tina can talk? After all the shit you two have been through when was the last time you two were alone enough for more than a quickie? 
    Bette (shock): Kit, I…
    Kit (throwing her hands up): I know you and your little hideouts in here.  
    Bette (blushing): It was Tina…
    Kit (shaking her head): Sure, blame it on that innocent soul. (Thinking) okay I’ll make a deal with you. (Bette raised her eyebrow) I’ll start making plans for Papi and I to get away if you and Tina do the same. (Getting off the desk) or are you still up to being able to keep up with her for a long weekend (winking.) 
    Bette (rubbing her face): Wait until I tell Papi about a little secret of yours.
    Papi (walking in): I already know about the foot thing and other things. Next on your list of threats (pulling out the days invoices and checking for deliveries.).
    Bette (laughing): Not a threat it’s a promise.
    Papi (taunting): You picking on my girlfriend…
    Bette (playing): And if I am Carmelita Tropicana?
    Papi (smirking): Bring it on Brown Barbie. I’ll beat your ass so bad and so hard your great grandkids will be feeling it. (Smiling) but then again you might enjoy it.
    Bette (swatting her arm): Depends on who’s doing the spanking? (Laughing as Papi’s face turned beat red) and what I’m being spanked for (Raising her cup in silent toast to the love of her life) thank you for being with her, taking care of her….
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    Comments

    1. I wanted to read through the whole chapter, but I really had a hard time following the dialogue because of all the descriptions you added in parenthesis. I understand that this is how it is done in script form, but because there is no spaces between the characters lines, it really is hard and confusing to read. I wanted to though!! If you change the format let me know. Thanks!

    2. Okay, I read it. You’ve got the makings of a really interesting story here, but to echo what Seahurst said, the formatting makes this fairly difficult to read. If you need a hand with formatting or whatever else, PM me and I’ll be happy to help. Cheers

    3. WOW! First I was like WTF, then I was like what she raped her, then I was like man what is Bette doing now I’m just confused I don’t know what to think.

    4. I have received a lot of WTF’s (lol.) I’ll give a short explanation. Helena’s a mess and is drowning in alcohol, pills and her past. Bette and Tina are the only ones to reach her. However, Bette has to push Helena to her limits of losing all control before they can get through the walls. The passion between Helena and Tina was bordering on consensual and non consensual. Between Bette and Helena however, it was Bette pushing her control so Helena would let her walls down.

    6. Thank you for the suggestion. I’m still getting the hang of this and appreciate any tips or advice. It’s been re edited for viewing and if it needs more drop me a line.

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