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    Dance With Us 3

    Story written on February 27, 2009 by tibette417.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=72737
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    Coming Home

    Papi (shaking her head): One more word Bette and I’ll take you up on that offer. I love her, she’s such an amazing woman and fucking gorgeous.  
    Bette (finishing her tea): It’s the Porter charm. (Standing up) I’m going to see what I can help with.
    Papi (shuffling papers): Good thing the alarms are automatic.
    Bette (growling): You’re in for it now.
    Papi laughed at Bette’s comment then went about trying to organize this jumbled paperwork.

    Shaolin Studios
    Helena (softly in her ear): Is she the elusive shadow that haunts me between dreams, memories and reality?  

    Tina (mulling over Helena’s question and statement on philosophy): She’s out there (moaning as Helena pressed harder against her.) She’s searching for you (grunting as Helena pinched her nipples through her top.) She’s not as elusive as she seems.  
    Helena (closing her eyes; losing herself in everything that was Tina; her scent, her essence, the way she tasted): Isn’t she? (Running her hand down Tina’s torso to cup her sex through fabric) she’s flaunts her fantasies between veils, her promises on the edge of conscious and unconscious and moves through light and shadow like a spirit.
    Tina (moving her head to give Helena more access as soft lips moved along her neck and shoulders, tender nips followed by a soothing tongue made her dizzy with passion losing all train of though at Helena nipped her earlobe; trying to maintain control stammering): Are you in love with Dusty? Does she treat you good? (Biting her lip as soft lips followed by shaper teeth bit into the juncture between neck and shoulder) do you love her (yelling as the pain and pleasure provided a headier mix?)
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    Comments

    1. I wanted to read through the whole chapter, but I really had a hard time following the dialogue because of all the descriptions you added in parenthesis. I understand that this is how it is done in script form, but because there is no spaces between the characters lines, it really is hard and confusing to read. I wanted to though!! If you change the format let me know. Thanks!

    2. Okay, I read it. You’ve got the makings of a really interesting story here, but to echo what Seahurst said, the formatting makes this fairly difficult to read. If you need a hand with formatting or whatever else, PM me and I’ll be happy to help. Cheers

    3. WOW! First I was like WTF, then I was like what she raped her, then I was like man what is Bette doing now I’m just confused I don’t know what to think.

    4. I have received a lot of WTF’s (lol.) I’ll give a short explanation. Helena’s a mess and is drowning in alcohol, pills and her past. Bette and Tina are the only ones to reach her. However, Bette has to push Helena to her limits of losing all control before they can get through the walls. The passion between Helena and Tina was bordering on consensual and non consensual. Between Bette and Helena however, it was Bette pushing her control so Helena would let her walls down.

    6. Thank you for the suggestion. I’m still getting the hang of this and appreciate any tips or advice. It’s been re edited for viewing and if it needs more drop me a line.

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