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Dance With Us 9
Papi (winking): And then some (turning around as Tina, Helena, Lisa and Kai came through the back door.)
Lisa (factually): You’re coming downtown with me Ms. Kennard and we’re going to do a fingerprint analysis and a lie detector test and we’ll see who’s right.
Alice (coming in): Well not Bette that’s for sure. Why all the fuss? Some of us are trying to sleep. You know I thought you were loud Bette, but dam these two (pointing to Lisa and Kai) fit right in.
Kit (rubbing her temples): Why is Tina being place under arrest?
Bette (yelling): The hell you are. Tina’s not going anywhere….
Lisa (hushing Kai): Did you know Tina was having an affair with Helena? That Jenny found out and she killed her so she could protect her two lovers.
Peggy (defensively): That’s poppy cock.
Alice (wide eyed): That’s kinky…
Everyone started yelling at once, Shane came in and watched the argument back and forth.
Shane (slamming a frying pan on the stove): Time out. Tina was with me for a while getting the negatives out of the attic and into her car.
Bette (having had enough): That’s it. I admit. I killed her. I did it to protect my fiancé and my daughter.
Kai (putting her head down): That’s impossible…
Lisa (incredulously): And why is that love?
Kai (holding up another item): Because whoever did had big hands like a boxers and strong too(showing them a long thin piece of cord.)
Dylan’s Apartment
Dylan grabbing her keys and knapsack. Opening the door she came face to face with Dusty.
Dusty (folding her arms across her chest; blocking Dylan’s way): Hello Dylan. How’s my little play toy? Is she still screaming? I could make it all better for her and for you too (licking her lips.)
Dylan (setting her bag down): Get the fuck off my property.
Dusty (not moving): Where’s Helena?
Dylan (laughing): I don’ t think so. Now leave (grabbing her bag.) I didn’t know the litter laws were so lax around here.
Dusty (slamming her into the wall): Listen to me. Catherine’s lost it. She’s gunning for Helena.
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(27 votes, average: 3.41 out of 5)
Nice curve ball adding Catherine and Dusty to the mix. It’s definitely becoming a much more complex crime scene.
Badge #417 You are doing a wonderful job, with the people and the crime sence. Now you have added Dusty and Catherine and Wentworth. Lets get Dylan and Helena together. Peggy is so very good to the girls and might have added two more children to theother 9 or 10. thanks
wow that was so great..everything conversation …i can only inspire to be you..PPS
Who dun it????? Wow, what a mess. Let’s get Dusty and Catherine back in jail. I hope Bette doesn’t come face to face with Tina’s sister and father; they may wind you in the hospital and Bette in jail on assault charges. Great post. PPS
Wow, I totally love your dramatic writing style. Great job.
Hello TB417, What a wonderful mess you have created. I am just loving how all the gang are together and yet apart. Can’t wait to read more so please continue soon. Your Loyal Fan.
Oh damn drama drama !