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Dance With Us 9
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Dusty (pulling away from the curb): She can stay at the motel. And the only thing I want when I get home is you with your legs spread and yelling my name.
Catherine cringed, wondering how Dusty had changed so quickly. She was cruel and mean before but she had become completely sadistic and merciless.
Tina and Bette’s House
Kai (showing them her diagram): Whoever it is maybe they had help, maybe they didn’t.
Lisa (repeating the information Kit gave her): And when you get it, get it to me immediately. Thanks (closing her phone.) Well it’s wait and see.
Tina (leaning against Bette): I don’t understand, everyone was with us and we were all in and out…
Shane (nodding): It’s pretty much announce yourself and come on in…
Alice (factually): That might change…
Papi (looking towards the front door): That’s why they have a doorbell…
Tasha (coming in): Hey! Sargent…
Kai (teasing): Off the clock…
Lisa (sitting down): Tasha, seems as we may have a lead.
Bette (sarcastically): And surprisingly no one’s under arrest….
Dylan (knocking and coming in): Hey! Who?
Helena (leaning against the counter): Articulate as always.
Kit (pointing): That’s Kai Duffy, Lisa Duffy’s wife. The rest of us you know…
Dylan (smirking): Yes.
Lisa (looking at Dylan’s backpack, seeing the manila envelope): What’s that?
Dylan (setting her bag down): I was cornered in the hallway at my apartment complex and she gave me this.
Kai (taking it; she pulled out several photos and her jaw dropped): Honey I think you better have a look at this.
Dylan (trying to see): Someone gave me those just now…
Helena (putting two and two together): So who was it Catherine or Dusty…
Alice (standing): You lying…
Carmen (mumbling): Anger Management (helping Tasha keep her in the chair.) And she’s not lying…
Alice (sitting down): Well you never know what someone might know and we might not know that they know that we don’t know (everyone looked at her.) What that made sense?
Tasha (kissing her cheek): To you it did, I’m trying to decipher it…
Lisa (looking at the photos; she couldn’t figure out what the angle was except to catch various people in compromising positions): I don’t think she’s lying. In fact (putting the pictures back in the envelope) she just may have given me the person or persons not invited that might have been here that night. You said Dusty or Catherine.
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Nice curve ball adding Catherine and Dusty to the mix. It’s definitely becoming a much more complex crime scene.
Badge #417 You are doing a wonderful job, with the people and the crime sence. Now you have added Dusty and Catherine and Wentworth. Lets get Dylan and Helena together. Peggy is so very good to the girls and might have added two more children to theother 9 or 10. thanks
wow that was so great..everything conversation …i can only inspire to be you..PPS
Who dun it????? Wow, what a mess. Let’s get Dusty and Catherine back in jail. I hope Bette doesn’t come face to face with Tina’s sister and father; they may wind you in the hospital and Bette in jail on assault charges. Great post. PPS
Wow, I totally love your dramatic writing style. Great job.
Hello TB417, What a wonderful mess you have created. I am just loving how all the gang are together and yet apart. Can’t wait to read more so please continue soon. Your Loyal Fan.
Oh damn drama drama !