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Day 11, Letter 11
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Tina laughed, avoiding the hands reaching for her, stepping away from the bed and temptation. “Afternoon sex is your favorite. So is nighttime sex and pool sex and kitchen sex and garden sex… get up and get showered Sugar Plum, let’s go…”
“Only if you let me go down on you before Alice gets here.”
“You are in no position to make demands…”
“What position do I need to be in? On my knees? All fours? Tell me, I am all in…” They both laughed, Bette sitting up to take her coffee from Tina, cupping the mug with her eyes on the blonde.
“Up Sweet Sweet…” Tina smiled, kissing Bette’s forehead and left the room, satisfied that her girlfriend was at least upright.
When Bette entered the kitchen, she was dressed in a white tank and loose-fitting yoga pants, her hair still damp from the shower. She circled Tina’s waist from behind, her hands busy finding their way to cup Tina’s breasts, going under the bra almost immediately.
“You feel so good…” she breathed in Tina’s ear; taking the earlobe into her mouth, her voice soft.
“Are you ready to help?” Tina said kissing Bette on the cheek. “You smell good, Babe…”
“I am ready to help. Kiss me first, a real good-morning-I-love- you kiss…”
Tina met Bette’s mouth with her own and they were off, Bette tasing of toothpaste with a hint of coffee and Tina of cinnamon and nutmeg. Bette’s hands kneaded Tina’s breasts then one crept down her stomach to the waist of her jeans when Tina pulled away, flushed and more than a little breathless.
“No. No. Stop it you goose.” Tina wiggled her hips to get out of the reach of that roaming hand, but Bette hugged her close.
“Fine. Later, though. I have to. It’s like a Christmas Eve Eve rule… ten clits a-clitting…” And she smiled as Tina laughed, her head dropping back on Bette’s shoulder.
“Clever, Babe. They teach you that at Yale?”
“I learned a lot of useful things at Yale…” Bette confirmed salaciously, grinning. She kissed the side of Tina’s head and refilled her coffee mug, sneaking a piece of one of the cutup peaches from the bowl by the stove.
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What a perfect day! Friendship and love and: Secret peach pie. Thank you!! We should all have a true love who will make us secret peach pie. So simple and sweet and yet it speaks absolute volumes. This is one of the best characterizations of Tina ever – would be the best but well river Tina and Lady Christina are still out there- hmmm – so – this is a really and truly lovely and loving and sexy and kind Tina! Hiding the pie was gold!! They work together in the kitchen as partners, in total sync, together, just like they make love.
And is there anything better in fan fiction world than a horny, playful, tipsy Bette. “I am ready to help. Kiss me first, a real good-morning-I-love- you kiss…” This is a great line! Bette would have Tina right then and there. And her desire only increases:
“Tee, I can see down your shirt” Bette whispered loudly but no one heard…
“Let’s just go to the bedroom,” Bette purred, quieter this time as Carmen shook her gift dramatically, giving Shane a sexy look. Tina reached for Bette’s hand, needing it off her ear or she was likely to become a puddle on the couch.
“I’ll be quick…” Bette persisted…
“Boobs, Tee. Let’s see ‘em”
How perfect that Tina essentially put Bette to bed. To sleep. To spoon. Bette is so utterly happy and in love and cannot get enough of Tina. But sleep is fine tonight. Tina is next to her. Bette is so at peace. Order has been restored and her life makes sense again.
“They climbed in bed, and lay facing each other, Bette smiling. “Your eyes are sparkly, Tee. I love you. Do you know that?…“I do. I love you too. Roll over, it’s time for sleep.” “Ok. Will you sleep close to me? Please, Tee?”
“Yes. Be my little spoon.”“I like spoons. Spoons and pie…And you…Tina smiled…I love you, Honey. Love you. Sleep now, close your eyes, ok?”…“If I go to sleep will you be there when I wake up?” Bette asked, quietly, suddenly worried.“Yes. I will never leave you. Ever. Sleep…”
Mindfulness indeed. Bette’s letters paid off. Tina is home. Forever. Spoons and pie. All is right with the world. Thank you!!
This is a great comment Billy! You couldn’t have said it better!
Spoons and pie!
That’s my favourite quote from Bette! :-D Well said, Billy.
Mindfulness indeed! Great comment, Billy as always. Order has been restored. And NO, emphatically NO there is nothing better in fanfic than a horn, tipsy Bette. LOL.
This Tina vs River Tina vs Healer Tina…. big debate!
Can’t say it better than Billy….. funny how a little alcohol removes all inhibitions from Bette. She still has some, but she not beyond begging for a little alone time… “I’ll be quick.” If they were not so in love and really had a desire for one another, that might be a little irritating. But Tina knows that Bette has never been quick. The takes the time which is appropriate for the moment.
So tomorrow is Christmas … there still a bit of mess around the tree to clean up – torn wrappings and probably empty glasses. Maybe there is some left over pie for breakfast – blue berry or apple anyway. But who knows, they may never leave the bed, after all, its Christmas…..
Thanks for this chapter…..
Love a slightly inebriated Bette. Especially when the full throated laugh comes out.
I LOVE left over pie for breakfast. That and cold pizza. Not together. Thanks Martha!
BK!
Finally caught up with your Twelve Days of Christmas. Brilliant as always!
Safe to say Bette enjoyed Tina’s special secret pie with its own delectable fruit!..No other ingredients needed!
jlr921
Thank you JLR! LOL
What can i possible add more to Billy’s comment?!
But i found one more thing that i loved:
“You taste so fucking good, Baby” Bette murmured. It was everything Bette wanted and more. A girlfriend who loved her, loved her despite her flaws, in spite of her behavior. A girlfriend who demanded she do better, who asked the same thing of herself. A girlfriend, her person. She trusted Tina completely, loved her madly. And for Bette, this act of submission and giving was such a beautiful extension of all those things”
So true, they are equal in every aspect in their relationship, they love each other on every level and Bette’s shows her love and dedication to them the best by making love to Tina. They are so much better in the communication area but Bette is and will be the best at communication by making love.
This was truly a brilliant chapter, love a giddy and slightly drunken Bette, she is so adorable!
And this was so sweet:
“They climbed in bed, and lay facing each other, Bette smiling. “Your eyes are sparkly, Tee. I love you. Do you know that?…“I do. I love you too. Roll over, it’s time for sleep.” “Ok. Will you sleep close to me? Please, Tee?”
“Yes. Be my little spoon.”“I like spoons. Spoons and pie…And you…Tina smiled…I love you, Honey. Love you. Sleep now, close your eyes, ok?”…“If I go to sleep will you be there when I wake up?” Bette asked, quietly, suddenly worried.“Yes. I will never leave you. Ever. Sleep…”
My heart melted when reading this!
So sad to see this end so soon, yes i know i am greedy but i can’t get enough of your Tibette! Thank you BK!
Equals is every way. Lovely comment.
Excellent comment BiBi – enjoy your long holiday break and be safe.
I cannot better the Comments of Billy, Martha and Bibi we are all on the same sheet and I say a hearty Ditto to all three – brilliant Chapter, brilliant comments.
Agree so much that this is a truly wonderful Tibette with each character adorable in their own way. I also agree that the River Tina and Lady Christina are on a par with this Tina and I look forward to reading more of the River and the high seas,
Part of Bette’s letter made me laugh – The birds are all chirpy, the sun is too loud and even the squirrels are moving too fast. Alice had a million questions at The Planet when I went to get a jolt of coffee to wake up. One day a doctor will dissect her brain and cure Chronic Fatigue Syndrome.
I like spoons and pie and I love this chapter
Thanks BK stay safe and well
One day a doctor will dissect her brain!! Hahaha.
Brilliant comments, honestly the best part of writing is to see what ya’ll have to say!
Many good comments already. I think it was SassyGran who recently said that something like reading comments was just as good as reading the story. Totally!
Such a cosy evening with the framily. Loved it when Tina opened her gift from Shane and Bette was taken by the book immediately. Such an art geek! :-) Forgettting about being frisky by the first look of anything art. I could see Tina and Bette sitting with the crew, laughing, talking and form time to time leaning back, observing, looking at their friends and each other and wondering how they could be so lucky to have so much love in their lifes again.
My favourite moments of this chapter are Tina waking up Bette in the morning with sleepy, horny Bette and Tina undressing Bette, coaxing her lovingly to help her, to brush her teeth and to get her into bed to sleep. You know that I love drunk Tina. But Bette is quite cute as well.
Thank you for another Christmas present, BK. You’re one hardworking writer, giving us all so much joy and fun in these strange, unreal times. Come on gals, let’s move to give BK one hell of a La-Ola, Mexican Wave!
This has been such a great short story, looking forward to the final chapter. And then I’m totally ready to return to the seas with Captain Bette and Lady Christina, evil lurking ashore. Of course lets not forget about the upcoming wedding at the river. Water mouse marrying Mama FisherRabbit.
Stay safe, stay healthy
A quiet, passive bunch we are NOT!! We dive in head-first, side ways and doin’ a back flip. Indeed, the comments are the whip cream on our BK peach pie. YUMM!!
Agree. I love the comments. Yum is right!
I agree, reading these comments is as much fun as writing the stories. I will take your La-Ola and Mexican Wave! I am ready to return to the high seas and quiet river… glad you are along to join me.
Tina,
. . . . . There is no love life. . . . .She doesn’t understand that my mind is full. Of you. There will be a place for you at the table for Thanksgiving. Come home.
Bette.
Love when Tibette find themselves cooking together. Tina giving instructions and Bette dutifully following. Seamless working together. “Ten clits a clitting”!!! Good one BK!!!
And concerning the arrival of guests and Alice in particular. I HATE it when she barges into “their” home. She wants to be 1st to arrive, but NEVER to help with the meal prep. She really has a voyeristic flare of wanting to “catch” B&T having sex. Who does that???? Seriously, can you see either T or B busting up into Alices’ place even once?
Anyway, back to this beautiful story. “A girlfriend, HER person. She trusted Tina completely, loved her madly.
“Kit shared her good news about being done with community service and her plans to tour again, making Bette worry until she felt Tina’s hand take hers and squeeze it gently”.
Big moment. If NO Tina, Bette would should have said something to deflate Kit’s ballon. Forgetting that Kit surely “knows” her triggers and is fully aware of the cost of lost “sobriety”.
One of the things Kit had been trying to help Bette realize is that her (Bette’s) triggers are no less dangerous and calamitous as her own. Betty has always felt likes she was “controlling” the very relational things that (so easily) sent her spiraling into the abyss. At least Kit knew her own tendencies & faults.
After tomorrow’s 12th letter, will go back and re-read the Thanksgiving letter and continue thru these 12 glorious days of revelations, encouragement and joyfulness.
I want to read them all again in sequence. That will be a real treat. Agree about Alice. And I’m sure she did not help with cleanup. Like that my favorite pie was hidden. Glad that Kit and Bette are forging a healthy sisterly bond. And last but not least “Ten clits a clitting”…well what is there to say??
This is powerful stuff, DT. I love how you compared Kit’s triggers and controlling behaviors to Bette’s. Well done, I had not thought it through like that. I will reread these too, I am caught in the weeds so to speak and it will be nice to read just to enjoy and not critique. THanks
I love this story. LOVE IT. this chapter is so fun with the dinner party of friends. and we get cuddly morning bette and then tipsy bossy horny bette….tina is a lucky woman. I love how much cooking they do in the kitchen…and out of the kitchen. (I’ll leave that comment…right…there). :)
your voice for Bette and Tina is really unmatched and wonderful…it’s how I see them…how I wish the show would show them. it’s not easy to make sense of what happened on the show but, for me, your stories do just that.
thank you! I cannot wait to read the next chapter…and for you to continue your other stories (a-hoy, matey! ;))
BK
Love when they are all together being what family should be. Love how Tina manages a tipsy Bette, loving and caring ready to reassure a still insecure Bette.
Loving this story.
K