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Daydreams from the Very Beginning
In one confident yet gentle movement, Better leant down and kissed Tina’s morning lips. Those lips were slightly parted as Bette placed her own soft lips on top of them. There wasn’t much movement to the kiss, just gentle pressure – pressure that made Tina release a quiet moan as she knew it was only the beginning. None of her questions mattered any longer, she was living in this beautiful moment, and this moment alone.
With her lips only raised slightly above Tina’s, Bette confidently whispered, “Open your legs for me please.” At this request Tina was utterly helpless to even have a voice of her own. She simply abided by Bette’s request and drew her legs up so that they were bent in the middle, and she was completely exposed to this sensual stranger who had found her way into Tina’s bedroom.
Bette took her right hand and began palming Tina. This bold move took Tina by surprise but it felt so good. Bette never took her eyes from Tina’s eyes as she did this. She began varying her speed and pushed with a bit more force as well. In that controlled, sensual voice Bette again spoke “Tell me when it’s time to enter you with any of my fingers.” Tina quietly gasped, and licked her lips quickly as Bette’s dialogue was completely drying out her mouth. Seeing this, Bette lowered her mouth to Tina’s and hungrily outlined both her top and bottom lip with her own wet tongue. It felt so good that she lapped the open, warm mouth a second time, this time ending with a slow tug on Tina’s bottom lip. She then licked her own lips to re-moisten them and to taste Tina’s flavour.
Tina was nervous and breathing quickly, but she had to say it. She knew that Bette would hold her ground – that she wouldn’t change the cupping and the rubbing between her legs until she asked for what she wanted.
“Please feel me – please put a finger inside me.” Bette grinned down at Tina upon hearing those words coming from this incredibly beautiful blonde and immediately slipped her index finger into Tina’s very wet core. Both women were slightly surprised at how very wet Tina actually was.
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(52 votes, average: 4.44 out of 5)
Wow! That was hot…
Hot damn…:)PPS
If only that happened when I hit “snooze”.
thanks for the feedback guys…and ‘funnyone’ you made me laugh! same goes for me. i’m going to set my alarm tonight so i have the chance to hit “snooze” just in case;)
That snooze button is very powerful, How many women will hit that button in the morning? Yes I think that you could write about 25 chapters and then we will let you know then thanks
dear god woman are u trying to kill us with your first try at fanfic talk about hot!!!!great job!!!!!
Very hot and very nicely written. Please, please continue. Thank you.
yeah…well…not too bad…just kidding…that Bette’s got some nerve…and yeah, I’m with ‘funnyone’…if only!!!
Whoa! You have my complete attention after reading Chapter 1! Bring on more please!!!!
Well rest assured that you aren’t the only one Tibette obsessed. If this is your first fan fic, it was amazing. You have definitely created your mark. Tina has a very, very, very vivid imagination when she’s in snooze mode!
Oh, most definitly keep writing. It’s good thing I do not have a snooze button(or a Bette)like Tina’s, because I would not have a job today. PPS
BRB, have to wipe the sweat off my face
TBO, you say that like fanfic crack is a bad thing! LMAO…Holy mother of God woman! You wore me out, at work no less. Very bad thing!
It was great! I’m sure she’s dreaming ! But that’s great! :D :D I When she’ll wake up she will know what to do … go after bette :p
She has got to be dreaming, but if she’s not she needs to hurry and make Bette feel as good as she does. Please continue with this and soon.
Wow, that was hot. Can’t wait to read more.
Wow interesting, continue please
What a fantasy, it was a dream wasn’t it? At any rate, HOT. Yes, please continue.
My God, that was a very good & Hot first attempt at fanfic. Yes, please continue.
ok so i can easily see how all of you get so hooked. this site is like crack now for me….as are your comments and feedback….i have already started writing Chapter Two….will post it soon…thanks again for all the great posts.
Muy Caliente!!! Now my only question is this, is Tina totally dreaming or what? PPS! This is a great start.
Oh my..if this is your first attempt I can’t wait to see the next 50 chapters or so. OMG! We all want that “magic” snooze button now.
Holy cow, damn that was so hot and awesome, love it. Please post more, thanks!
Hope that wasn’t a dream, and if it was- make it a reality!
Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm