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Daydreams from the Very Beginning
“This finger?” Bette implored as she slide that same finger in and out of Tina a few times, varying the pace slightly with her gentle push. Tina couldn’t speak it felt so good. She just tried raising her head towards Bette to hopefully connect for another warm kiss. Bette pulled her head back though, eluding the kiss….for now. “How about this one instead?” she said as this time she slid her middle finger into Tina’s tightening centre. Tina moaned loudly as this finger entering her was more like a thrust. “Hmmm” said Bette, I’m not convinced. I think it might be this one” and at that she slide her ring finger inside Tina. “Or maybe this one is the one that you want right now” she said in a somewhat raspy, sexual tone. She took the tip of her baby finger and began teasing Tina at the very outside opening of her centre. The baby finger was flicking Tina ever so slowly, but rhythmically.
Tina couldn’t take it anymore. She was so turned on, so aroused, so wanting of something she had only ever fantasized about before –a beautiful woman’s mouth wrapped around her opening.
So she grabbed Bette’s soft brunette tresses and pulled her in for a passionate kiss. It was hard and focused and she let Bette know that she was all hers and that she was in need of much more contact. So through muffled language as it was all said through constant, wet kisses Tina begged Bette “please slide down me, please taste me with your tongue, please take me, please…”
Bette didn’t waste any time. She immediately lowered her body and nestled herself between Tina’s warm, toned runner’s thighs. She felt her own body release more wetness and arousal upon the intake of Tina’s scent. She smelled so fresh, so sexual, so clean and perfect. Bette looked back up the length of Tina’s body as her hands and fingers completely parted Tina. She then took a small breath and devoured Tina from top to bottom. She used her fingers, her tongue, her mouth, her hot breath, anything she could to bring Tina to full climax. She felt Tina grow more and more near the edge, as Tina closed around Bette’s finger like a slow, strong vice. Bette uttered “Please come for me Tina, please come for me right now, right now….please let me taste all of you” With that she flicked Tina’s swollen nub faster and harder and pushed Tina up further in the air so that she was more exposed. Her tongue then traced Tina from the line of her fine, blonde public hair, all the way down, allowing her to take some of Tina’s abundant wetness and circle her tight anus with it, this last move clearly sending Tina to new levels of pleasure. Bette smiled to herself realizing how much pleasure this brought her lover, so she decided to slightly penetrate its opening in the same rhythm that she was doing to Tina’s much wetter opening.
“Oh my….oh my god….oh my god” as Tina’s hands grabbed the bottom sheet tightly as she came so loud and so hard for Bette. She stopped breathing for a moment, unable to even comprehend what had just happened to her. Never before has she known such sexual arousal.
As she lie there dazed and confused and her body twitching with a few after shocks, she knew one thing and one thing only…she wanted…..no, she needed….to return the favour…..
TBC
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(52 votes, average: 4.44 out of 5)
Wow! That was hot…
Hot damn…:)PPS
If only that happened when I hit “snooze”.
thanks for the feedback guys…and ‘funnyone’ you made me laugh! same goes for me. i’m going to set my alarm tonight so i have the chance to hit “snooze” just in case;)
That snooze button is very powerful, How many women will hit that button in the morning? Yes I think that you could write about 25 chapters and then we will let you know then thanks
dear god woman are u trying to kill us with your first try at fanfic talk about hot!!!!great job!!!!!
Very hot and very nicely written. Please, please continue. Thank you.
yeah…well…not too bad…just kidding…that Bette’s got some nerve…and yeah, I’m with ‘funnyone’…if only!!!
Whoa! You have my complete attention after reading Chapter 1! Bring on more please!!!!
Well rest assured that you aren’t the only one Tibette obsessed. If this is your first fan fic, it was amazing. You have definitely created your mark. Tina has a very, very, very vivid imagination when she’s in snooze mode!
Oh, most definitly keep writing. It’s good thing I do not have a snooze button(or a Bette)like Tina’s, because I would not have a job today. PPS
BRB, have to wipe the sweat off my face
TBO, you say that like fanfic crack is a bad thing! LMAO…Holy mother of God woman! You wore me out, at work no less. Very bad thing!
It was great! I’m sure she’s dreaming ! But that’s great! :D :D I When she’ll wake up she will know what to do … go after bette :p
She has got to be dreaming, but if she’s not she needs to hurry and make Bette feel as good as she does. Please continue with this and soon.
Wow, that was hot. Can’t wait to read more.
Wow interesting, continue please
What a fantasy, it was a dream wasn’t it? At any rate, HOT. Yes, please continue.
My God, that was a very good & Hot first attempt at fanfic. Yes, please continue.
ok so i can easily see how all of you get so hooked. this site is like crack now for me….as are your comments and feedback….i have already started writing Chapter Two….will post it soon…thanks again for all the great posts.
Muy Caliente!!! Now my only question is this, is Tina totally dreaming or what? PPS! This is a great start.
Oh my..if this is your first attempt I can’t wait to see the next 50 chapters or so. OMG! We all want that “magic” snooze button now.
Holy cow, damn that was so hot and awesome, love it. Please post more, thanks!
Hope that wasn’t a dream, and if it was- make it a reality!
Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm