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Dead End – Chapter 4 (Go in circles or get out…which one would you do?)
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Tina: Bette fucking stop before you kill all of us!!
Bette finally looked her to Tina and saw just how frighten and scared she was and instantly felt bad about what she just did, but she wanted out if this fucking boomerang and the sooner the better.
Bette: There’s no way out Tina…we’re stuck here…we’re stuck out in the middle of nowhere and on top of everything we’re running out of gas. We have pass this same car eight times now…
Bette spoke softly as she was on the verge of tears, many thoughts ran through her head but none more than the thoughts of her baby girl Angelica.
Bette: I don’t know what to do.
Completely defeated…there it was, the first tear slowly creeping down the edges of her face…she was scared…hell everyone was, their fun vacation was beginning to be the nightmare from hell.
Alice: What do we do now?
Dana: We sit here til someone comes to help us.
Alice: Oh that’s a really great idea Dane, if only we weren’t the only fucking idiot on this death road…what cars have you seen since we’ve been out here??
Dana: I’m just trying to give us a solution here Al!
Shane: Ok no need to start jumping down each others throat again…Bette turn around, maybe if we go backwards, we will get different results.
Dana: How so?
Shane: Sometimes backwards, is the way forwards.
Alice: another Yoda moment, just great.
Alice said sarcastically throwing her hands up.
Tina: It’s worth a try babe.
Tina said rubbing Bette’s hands that still had its tight grip around the steering wheel to calm her down and give some kind of hope, she reaches over and wipe the tears off Bette cheeks then took her right hand off the steering wheel and pressed her warms lips to it.
Tina: Come on babe, we got to try.
Bette took a deep breath to compose herself then made a u-turn hoping sound kind of change would come but after yet another fifteen minutes, they were back where they started from.
Alice: Well anyone else has any other ideas.
Shane: Well we can keep driving in circles or we can check that out…
Everyone looked out the window at the direction Shane was pointing to when they saw the old white house that seems to appear out from nowhere, even though it had been there all the time just no one cared to notice it, til now.
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know in my here in Peru also. many women are on the road and then you see with surprise that they are souls, and alice is very funny, and who is this woman? This year these very inspired, keep it up, thank you.
Wow! you’re busy today. This is definitely getting creepy. Waiting for the sinister serial killer to appear…. Thanks for posting 2 in 1 day!
Hey hey how come you manage to post two in a day? Making me look bad here lol
Catching up with the previous chapters.
I’m with doc, creepy for sure.
Come back soon alright!
Lol (Stands for lots of luv) ;)
Two post in one day, fantastic!
Creepy story, but hey, i am still able to read it without having nightmares ;)
Thanks for the quick updates!
Scary cat
TN1….Boom!…apples hitting roof of car!….you like that boom missy huh?..this is another split my britches from laughing so hard kinda sorta story.. and here I’m trying to watch da Cowboy game at the same time!…Dang!…great post TN1!…but nobody does it better!…git’r did luv….lubya!…kabam!
TN1, I’m your fan! Worshipping as you
are writing this story, you are
going very bem.É a horror tale with
a little comedy.
The gang is wonderful, they are interacting
that’s perfect.
If I’m not mistaken the movie Alice
says is the “Panic in the Forest”?
10 Stars.
MC I absolutely adore you darling, always good to read your comments
oh my god, please update this! its awesome! i wanna know whats gonna happen next!
sure thing babe!
yay! can’t wait :)